hjælp til engelsk

hej ville høre om der er nogle som lige kan rette et par linjer som jeg har skrevet på engelsk :-)

One of the major cultural similarities between the Danish culture and the one my parents practice is the great interest and demand for education. One of the things that I value a lot is that it is free to take an education in Denmark and that there are easier access to the educational system, and with that I mean that everyone can take an education, you don’t need to have a high position in society, you do not have to be rich or poor, believe in a “serten” religion, or have a “serten” Nationality in order to get an education.
I would like to have an education because it is something I really strive for. I love getting new knowledge and I want an education because I want to be in that part of society that helps Denmark economically, but also help the people and especially young people who do not fare particularly well at the school and in the society.
This small country Denmark has a lot to offer, I'm really glad that I had got the opportunity to these incredibly special things in Denmark such as education, wide range of experiential opportunities, different amusement parks, and fashion shops and much more. Denmark has been and will always be my wonderland in my fairytale stories which I will always love.