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Is violence ever an acceptable response to violence? Why/ Why not?
There are many kinds violence like young crime, beat each other, gun crime, murdering, turtor , children violence etc. but I will talk about children violence, because some parents still use violence like oldtime at their poor children, and violence is still a big issue in the world and in Danmark.
Before they get parents they said” when I get children I will never beat them. But some  parents do it anyway, even they now it is not illegal too beat their children. Some children get beat every day, and other sometimes.  In Danmark it is forbidden to beat their children. The 10 June 1997 has  parliament decided that parents should no longer beat their children.
The authority of the law text (§ 2 paragraph 2) says:
The child has the right to care and safety. It should be treated with respect for their person and may be subject to corporal punishment or other humiliating treatment.

The Penal Code § 244 says that those parents who abuse children or somehow attacking someone else's body, punishable by fine or imprisonment for up to 3 years.
Even teacher was allowed too beat their students, but until 1967 it was forbidden to beat the student from their teacher.
There are many reasons that parents use vioence at their children, I will name some of the reason why parents use violence. The reasons are why parents use violence is because: they are tired that children doesnt listen to them, crying, screaming, doesn’t sleep on time, and want to show who is in charge etc. In stress and bustle it can be to beat a last result.  Lots of alcoholics use violence at their children, because they drink too much. Some teenage girls who are raped but keeps the child may have difficulty in living with her unwanted child.  She get trouble raising the child all, and that why she beat the child because she is all by herself too watch the child that is without a father and child needs love from both parents but the child cant get love because it is unwanted. Young girls are not mature enough to watch kids and see as a solution to beat her child. There is another reason that parents beat their own children are because they themselves have experienced violence in childhood.  
Children who get beaten up by their parents will usually calm down and behave well, but after a while they will begin again. It means that, parents who beat their child is not good, because after while they begin again
 
Children who are raised in violent ways will more become violent or criminal.
When parents beat their children, most children experience a feeling of sadness. The child's reactions to violence can describe in this way
shock
Shame loss through self-esteem
guilt
anger
loyalty Conflict
It will never be the same no matter what you do.  Because the wounds they were exposed to can not heal, they leave deep tracks. It means parents should never use violence too their children because now you know it doesn’t well for the child health.

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