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Dear Johnson Family

Thank you for the letter, it was nice to hear from all of you. I think that you all want to use (spend) your time on me.
When I got your letter I felt happy. My dream has always been to come to England, and now it can come true.
About myself:
My name is Andreas Hansen, and I come from a little town called Rynkeby on Fyn. I’m 15 years old. My family is very big, because my father and mother are separated, and then (so) I have two families. I live alternately with my mother and my father.
I love sports, and I love mostly football. I’ve been playing football, since I was little. In my spare time I play football. England is a fantastic football country, because they(you? , da dem du skriver til er fra UK) have some of the world’s best teams. My favourite team is Manchester United.  
I really want to visit London. I’ve always dreamed about visiting England, because I have been in a lot of other countries, and then I want to visit England now. I’m very happy. It will(is going to) be the best three weeks in my life.
One of the things that I want to get out of this visit is of course, primarily to get a really cool experience and get some new friends and learn new people. I want to see, how “English people” live today. I want to see your whole family. Get a glimpse of what an English family is doing and how they keep(spend?) their summer.
I think it will be an exciting experience. I will also be better to speak English. I want to see some of your schools, how they look like, compared with our schools here in Denmark. I will also meet some new people.

Jeg har slettet et par endelser udover de fejl jeg har markeret