Engelsk
Help please :D
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My name is Mulle. I am 15 years old and currently studying in ninth grade. I would like to study in U.S.A after ninth grade. I’m a social person, and I like to meat new people. I’m a hardworking girl, and love to challenge my self. I like to participate in singing competitions because my passion is singing. I’m girl who has a lot of dreams, and sometimes my dreams can be unrealistic. I like policy and I’m very interest in what happens round the world.
I don’t think it will be hard for me to communicant with Americans because I have shown remarkable qualifications in the subjects English.
It would be important for me to have a year in U.S.A, because I would like to study English after High School. I will bring my good mood and my catching smile.
Yours sincerely
Mulle Hansen
Svar #3
17. februar 2012 af Stygotius (Slettet)
My name is Mulle. I am 15 years old and currently studying in ninth grade ("grade" er amerikansk, "form" er engelsk). I would like to study in the U.S.A after ninth grade. I’m a (social) sociable person, and I like to (meat) meet new people. I’m a hardworking girl(,) and love (to challenge my self) challenges / to take myself to a limit. I like to participate in singing competitions because my passion is singing. I’m a girl (who has) with a lot of dreams, (and) but sometimes my dreams can be unrealistic. I like (policy) politics and I’m very interested in what happens round the world.
I don’t think it will be hard for me to (communicant) communicate with Americans because I have shown remarkable qualifications in (the subjects) English. (hmmm... -"unrealistic"?)
It would be important for me to have a year in the U.S.A(,) because I would like to study English after (H)high (S)school. I will bring my good mood and my catching smile.
Yours sincerely,
Mulle Hansen
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