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07. maj 2012 af Hash1234 (Slettet) - Niveau: A-niveau

Hey hey derude, jeg ville bare høre om der en eller flere der har overskud til at rette et engelsk stil for mig, den er på 295 ord, og tager ingentid for en engelsk haj at rette. Tak på Forhånd! :-=)


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Svar #1
07. maj 2012 af studienord (Slettet)

Ja meget gerne.


Svar #2
07. maj 2012 af Hash1234 (Slettet)

The reaction to the starbucks relatively new initiative to support poor countries are " what a amazing shop, finally some big shops like these going to help the poor children in africa, lets get a coffe there” My oppinion on this is to sitet, first I think it’s a great people worldwide will always help the poor childrens, so when you finally get the chance, while get something back, it's smart. On the other hand, I'm really critical. I wonder if Starbucks is trying to make the world a better place to be, or whether they just trying to market themselves by using young poor children as their advertising with this I have chosen to relate my critical and I think in reality they trying to exploit the young children, which I definitely think is disrespectful.

Starbucks newly launched a new advertising and about that new commercial I’ll say that they really came on the sidelines trying among other things, getting civilian people to provide 5 hours of community service or to get people to donate money, they use the slogan "Together We Can move into a brighter future" I believe that starbucks should concentrate on something other advertising, rather than advertise as emergency organizations as Unicef, Red cross and amnisti.

My message about all this is I have seen and read about the emergency supplies, money and reccourser which is paid to the poor countries and never reach. beyond that, it has been several discussions about the things we pay will reach the poor Africans . So I would like as a customer, be sure that the 7$ extra that I pay really arrive, or starbucks get payt 7$ extra to themselves.


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Svar #3
08. maj 2012 af studienord (Slettet)

"what an amazing shop,.........finally some big shops like these going to help the poor children in Africa,lets get some coffee there" My opinion on this is to-sided. poor children ikke childrens

whether they are just ......by using young poor children for advertisement.

and i think in reality they are trying to ......

Starbucks recently .....a new advertisment...........

I believe that Starbucks should concentrate on something else than advertising.......Amnesty ikke amnisti.

 

money and resources ikke reccourser which are paid .....and never get to them...or Starbucks get paid ikke payt 

 

 


Svar #4
09. maj 2012 af Hash1234 (Slettet)

Kan jeg sende dig en stil, du kan rette efter. Hvorefter jeg vil betale for hjælpen?


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