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jo det kan jeg godt :)

2. Sinn Fein has several thousands of members. A small proportion of these are also in the IRA, but for the most part they are drawn wide from the workingclass catholic population.

I ones knew a family. They all lost their lifes in a trafic accident. Terrible, but that’s life. The accident they just mentioned on TV had not been that bad. A girl had broken the leg, that was all!

Christina did not like the new french girl which had begun in her class. She was sure of that Brian would find her to interesting with her black hair and long leg.

”Mine cake is bigger than your’s,” Willy said teasing to Sally, when Sam had given them a cake each. ”I don’t care. Mine taste better than your’s” Sally replied.

They were walking over a big field. Suddently one of them steped in a cowpat (kokasse). ”I hate the nature,” he exclaimed. ”Things like this never happens in a city.”

Christina and her friends were talking about the love. One of them said that she never had could understand what there was so special about it.

Leif allways blaimed the society for his bad marks at the school. He never admited that it could have been his own fault.

The argument ended with that Brian left Christina stand alone on the middle of the dance floor. It was not the first time she had behaved as a spoilt  child, and  this time he had have enough!

They were suppose to meet the day after at 2 o’clock, but when he arrived, nobody were there. ”Well,” he thought, ”I’m use to wait for her. Why should she be on time today?”

They were wery much afraid of that they should be late, but they succeeded in to arrive on time in spite of that the traffic had been very heavy.

Christina wanted to learn spanish, because she always had dreamed of becomming good at to speak foreign languages. 

Grazie mille, bella. De steder du skal være opmærksom på har jeg markeret med fed. :) Ord som bare skal fjernes har jeg gennemstreget (så du ikke spilder tid på at filosofere over hvad der mon skal stå i stedet for). ;)

Nogle af fejlene er stavebøffer, men nogle er også sprogkalker (dvs. en dansk frase oversat bogstaveligt til engelsk).

Sinn Fein has several thousands of members. A small proportion of these are also in the IRA, but for the most part they are drawn wide from the workingclass catholic population.

I ones knew a family. They all lost their lifes in a trafic accident. Terrible, but that’s life. The accident they just mentioned on TV had not been that bad. A girl had broken the leg, that was all!

Christina did not like the new french girl which had begun in her class. She was sure of that Brian would find her to interesting with her black hair and long leg. (Unless "Frenchy" is an amputee I'm pretty confident she's got two legs. Don't get the identical Danish singular and plural form ben confuse you.)

”Mine cake is bigger than your’s,” Willy said teasing [adjective or adverb?] to Sally, when Sam had given them a cake each. ”I don’t care. Mine taste [kongruens] better than your’s,” Sally replied.

They were walking over [præpositionsfejl] a big field. Suddently [typisk danskerstavebøf, denne her...jeg ved ikke hvorfor...] one of them steped in a cowpat. ”I hate the nature,” he exclaimed. ”Things like this never happens in a city.”

Christina and her friends were talking about the love [endnu et abstrakt substantiv -- jf. 'nature' i førgående klamamse]. One of them said that she never had could understand what there was so special about it. [can er nutidsformen, could er datidsformen, men der er ikke en førnutids- og førdatidsform per se, så du skal have fat i 'to be able to'. Husk korrekt placering af adverbium.]

Leif allways blaimed the society for his bad marks at the school. He never admited that it could have been his own fault.

The argument ended with that Brian left Christina stand alone on the middle of the dance floor. It was not the first time she had behaved as a spoilt child, and this time he had have enough! [Hvad er korrekt førdatidsform af 'to have'?]

They were suppose to meet the day after at 2 [ikke rigtigt en fejl, men små tal som dette bør skrives med bogstaver – hvis ikke andet så af æstetiske grunde] o’clock, but when he arrived, nobody were there. ”Well,” he thought, ”I’m use to wait for her. Why should she be on time today?”

They were wery much afraid of that they should be late, but they succeeded in to arrive on time in spite of that the traffic had been very heavy. [Hvad har vi lært om præposition + that (konjunktion)?]

Christina wanted to learn spanish, because she always had dreamed [husk korrekt placering af adverbium] of becomming good at to speak foreign languages. (Et verbum der efterfølger en præposition skal stå i en ganske bestemt form.]

Mange gange tak! :D

Nu fik du da andre til at lave hele arbejdet for dig. Wow, -det var smart.

Var det det du mente med at "hjælpe" dig ??

Nååå, det vil jeg nu ikke sige, gospode. Der er nogle steder hvor denne Sine-fidus stadigvæk skal yde en egen indsats. Langt hen ad vejen ved hun nu kun hvor fejlene er, og hvilke slags de er; hun er ikke blevet indviet i hvad de korrekte former skal være.

(Nisam glup, i nisam nicij rob.)

Hvis du opfatter det sådan så ja..

og opgaven går også ud på at jeg skal skrive hvorfor det er en fejl så endnu en gang tak rakijovic, det var virkelig en stor hjælp! :)

Jespersen, snuske, din kommatering (eller manglen på samme) er pinligt fraværende. 

Jeg er i godt humør i dag, så jeg er næsten villig til at se bort fra manglende stort "o" (hvis du endelig skal begynde en sætning med en konjunktion...) i dit indlæg...