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det er en outline af martin luthers, tale "i have a dream". 

Outline:
The speech “I have a dream” is well-known, all over the world. Especially one sentence from the famous speech is known, namely “I have a dream” (p.3), every time he says the sentence, ha also tells us about his dreams of America. One of his dreams is that America shall live in harmony, and that everyone will understand that all men are created equal.
In the first half of the speech, Martin Luther refers us of the injustice that the blacks have bin exposed to. He also reminds us of promises in the Emancipation Proclamation and refers to the declaration of independence, he tells us also about the minimum development trough the last 100 years.
In the second part of the speech he tells us about all his visions and ambitions for The United states of America. He repeats the sentence “let freedom ring” when he talks about how, freedom shall be scattered.
But the speech is not only arguing for freedom, but most of all “harmony” harmony in the states of America. He wants all Americans both Negroes and the white people, also the slave owners. He wants them all to live in harmony and freedom.
Martin Luther King does also emphasis that, the dream that he have cannot be realized if, everyone in American, blacks as whites doesn’t cooperate. For Martin freedom is a right to roam, and he does not blame the whites especially. He understands the world as a total unit, and that we cannot move on alone, but only move on as a unit.