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The price of becoming famous

Humans are daily affected by the media's way of representing the celebrities. We try to look up to the celebrities who is representing as good because we think that’s the right thing to do. The media's influence on people has through the last few decades increased dramatically. Their representing, of their ideal image which has been a huge problem for many young people around the world, because of their way of looking at health, is deeply disturbing. In this essay I will try to supplement my idea about ??why we are so intimidated to become famous and what is so eternally attraction of a life in the spotlight.

No private life, cameras everywhere, no sympathy and hush critics. These are the harsh realities of today’s most popular celebrities going trough. But why do we still want to become famous?  I think the young people's attraction to fame is related to the focus that is today having attention. And to become perfect and have a lot of money. It reminds me of the well know girl from Paradise hotel in 2009, Amalie Szigethy.  She was addicted to become famous. She would do anything to keep the viewers attention. When the camera was rolling on her face, she act like she was stupid and selfish also she has been drinking alcohol while knowing that the cameras were rolling, at somehow that got the viewers attention. She has been on several front-pages on Se og Hør about her many scandals. Her behavior in television programs is disturbing. She is representing as a bad character by the media. But what does she gets from all these scandals? Well of course she gets the attention, the young people loves it. They think it is interesting to see things that are stupid or just scandals. Today it’s all about getting popular even if it means that you have to do something stupid or cross shitting to get the attention.

We all want to feel good about us self and today the young ones only se the way to feel good about themselves is to become famous because the media is representing it good. but the question is, do the celebrities actually feel good about themselves?- is the money, many fans and  all that comes with being a celebrity actually make them feel good? - is becoming famous the only way to feel good about yourself? I think it is I many ways. I mean look at all the celebrities they look adorable and they can get almost anything they want. They must feel good about themselves especially because they are making thousands of people smile everyday and some is actually appreciating your work and they want more of you.  I do actually understand why so many want to become famous. But I think it's a shame that we are today abusing the beautiful with becoming famous. I believe that if you want to be known, you have to have a sound reason and talent for it. I think it’s a shame that Amalie, Gustav, Sidneey and a lot more have to exposes themselves to get attention. The media is abusing it and we forget the beauty of becoming famous. But the other side being famous also has it dark side, like I wrote before it’s hard to get a private life and there is defiantly hush critics out their which can affect the celebrities life, but I still see the beauty of being a celebrity.

But the big question is what happened to be the case is what price the results will have in the future to become famous. Can you imagine that we have gone from having to expose us self to the long term to make even grass border thing to become famous.

Can you estimate what your limit is and if you want to become famous will you expose yourself to get attention and what can it cause in the future?