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15. januar 2006 af martin88a (Slettet)
Hey ville blive utrolig glad hvis nogen gad kigge lidt på dette brev ikke på formalia men mere på hvad der står. På forhånd tusind tak.

Dear Sirs

An invitation to a workday.


We will like to inform you about a workday, we are having. The date is the 4 of February. The idea is that our students can hear about, what they can do after college.

We will invite you because of your great work by helping self starters. On our college we made our students interested in starting there own business. And after we have read the article in The Sunday Times about your firm. We now it will be a great opportunity to have you telling about your firm for our students.

We think it will be a great idea if one of young and successfully entrepreneurs can come. That will be a great inspiration for our young students

We hope that you can be able to send a young entrepreneur. To be inspiring for our students.

Yours faithfully

Martin Anker Larsen

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Svar #1
15. januar 2006 af Romulus (Slettet)

The date is the 4 of February. The idea is that our students can hear about, what they can do after college

---> The date is 4th February. The idea is that our students can hear about their options after graduating from college.

We will invite you because of your great work by helping self starters.

---> We are inviting you due to your great effort in helping self starters.

On our college we made our students interested in starting there own business.

---> We have made the students at our college interested in starting their own business.

And after we have read the article in The Sunday Times about your firm. We now it will be a great opportunity to have you telling about your firm for our students.

---> After having read the article about your firm in The Sunday Times, we think it will be a great opportunity having you to give a lecture about your firm for our students.

We think it will be a great idea if one of young and successfully entrepreneurs can come. That will be a great inspiration for our young students

---> We are convicted that it will be a great inspiration for our young students if a young and successful entrepreneur can attend our workday.

We hope that you can be able to send a young entrepreneur. To be inspiring for our students.


---> Virker som en gentagelse af forrige afsnit.








Svar #2
15. januar 2006 af martin88a (Slettet)

Tusind tak sidste afsnit har jeg slettet og erstattet med følgende.



We hope that your are interested in our project and looking forward to hear from you.

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Svar #3
15. januar 2006 af Marcus (Slettet)

"We hope that you are interested in our project and we are looking forward to hearing from you"

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