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Rettelse af kort opg.. MEGET VIGTIGT!

17. januar 2006 af maximuz (Slettet)
Jeg r politibetjenten som fortæller min oplevelse dagen efter til mine kollegaer..

The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time

We were all sitting around the table at lunch time, everybody were talking about what the had done the last couple of days. When it came to me I started thinking about the episode yesterday with the little bugger. A woman called the policestation and told us her dog were killed and a lillte boy was holdning it even though the dog was bloody. So Kate and I drove over to see what was going on. The old lady Mrs. Shears was so shocked that she needed to come down, but you know thats a women thing so Kate took care of it while I went after the boy.
I asked him couple of qustions but he seemed very confused and answered uncertainly. Suddenly he rolled onto the lawn and pressed his forehead to the ground and made a groaning noise that made me crazy, he was about 15 years old but was acting like a little brat. I was looking at him for a while when I held his arm and lifted him onto his feet, at that time he yelled at me and hit me. I was surprised, that little piece of shit hit ME, what was he thinking? So therefore i simply arrested the kid and took him down to the police station. After a while I found out that the kid was an autist child and people who are so, respons in a funny, but different kind a way.

Den skal afleveres imorgen så det er MEGET VIGTIGT at få den rettet igennem.. PLEASE..


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17. januar 2006 af Fingersen (Slettet)

We were all sitting around the table at lunch time/, e/(. E)verybody /were/(was) talking about what the(y) had (been) do(i)n/e/(g) the last couple of days.

/When it came to me/I started /thinking/(talking) about /the/(an) episode yesterday with /the/(a) little bugger.

A woman (had) called the police( )station /and told us/(telling) her dog /were/(had been) killed and a lillte boy was holdning /it even though/ the dog (which now had bled to death)/was bloody/.

So Kate and I drove over to see what was going on.

The old lady(,) Mrs. Shears(,) was so shocked that she needed to /come/(be calmed) down, /but you know thats a women thing/ so Kate /took care of it/(began calming her down) while I went /after/(to see to) the boy.

I asked him (a) couple of qustions but he seemed very confused and answered /uncertainly/(ambigiously).

Suddenly he rolled onto the lawn and pressed his forehead to the ground and made a groaning noise(, which)/that/ made me crazy/,/(.)

/h/(H)e was about 15 years old but was acting like a little brat.

I /was/ look/ing/(ed) at him for a while when I held his arm and /lifted/(got) him on/to/ his feet/,/(.)/a/(A)t that time(,) he (started) yell/ed/(ing) at me and hit(ting) me.

I was surprised(.)/t/(T)hat little piece of shit hit ME/,/(. W)/w/hat was he thinking?

So(,) therefore(,) /i/(I) simply arrested the kid and took him down to the police station.

After a while(,) I found out that the kid was an autist(ic) child and /people who are so,/(autistics) respon/s/(d) in a funny, but different kind /a/(of) way.

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MVH
Fingersen

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Svar #2
17. januar 2006 af Fingersen (Slettet)

lillte --> little

which now --> which

Mrs. --> Mrs

ambigiously --> ambigously

old but... --> old, but


Svar #3
17. januar 2006 af maximuz (Slettet)

Tusinde Tak... Jeg er overrasket over der findes sådan en side hvor man kan få så meget hjælp.. :) men takker ;)

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