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Hjælp med kort rettelse - VIGTIG og HASTER
07. marts 2007 af
Hans4444 (Slettet)
Dansk:
Vores venner, Brenda og Brian, er lige taget på ferie; de er kørt ud til deres sommerhus (cottage), som de har haft i nogle år. Huset blev bygget for 14 år siden, og da det var blevet færdiggjort, solgtes det til Brendas mor. Senere er moderen død, og Brenda har overtaget huset.
Det er blevet malet og repareret nogle gange, og de har også forsøgt at sælge det, men ingen ønsker at købe det: tider[ne] er blevet vanskelige.
Da de havde haft det nogle år, blev de enige om at beholde det. De har sommertider lejet det ud til turister, og på den måde holdt skindet på næsen (make ends meet).
Sidste sommer blev vi inviteret til en fest i huset; nogle naboer var også bedt om at komme, og da vi dukkede op, blev vi modtaget med åbne arme. Vejret var ikke så godt, så de havde kedet sig (be bored) og havde tømt adskillige glas, før vi ankom.
Det blev en fed fest - selvom et par af naboerne blev kørt (take) på hospitalet. Vi er kommet hjem i god behold (safely) og har allerede planlagt vores næste besøg hos (to) vennerne.
Engelsk:
Our friends, Brenda and Brian, have just went on vacation (holiday); they have driven to there cottage, which they have had for a few years. The House has been bullied for 14 years ago and when it was finished, it was sold to Brendas mother. Later the mother is dead and Brenda was overtaken the house.
It has been painted und repaired a few times and they have also tried to sell it, but no-one has the wish to buy it; the times have been difficult.
When they have had it for a few years they was agreed to keep it. They have sometimes went it out to tourists and that way they have make the ends meet.
Last summer we were invited to a party in the house; some neighbours were asked to come, and we were arrived, we have been received with open arms. The weather is not so good, sow they have be bored and have quite a few empty glasses before we arrived.
It was a great party – (selvom) one par of the neighbours has been taking to the hospital. We are home in safely and have already planned our next visit to our friends.
På forhånd tak - det er vigtigt.
Vores venner, Brenda og Brian, er lige taget på ferie; de er kørt ud til deres sommerhus (cottage), som de har haft i nogle år. Huset blev bygget for 14 år siden, og da det var blevet færdiggjort, solgtes det til Brendas mor. Senere er moderen død, og Brenda har overtaget huset.
Det er blevet malet og repareret nogle gange, og de har også forsøgt at sælge det, men ingen ønsker at købe det: tider[ne] er blevet vanskelige.
Da de havde haft det nogle år, blev de enige om at beholde det. De har sommertider lejet det ud til turister, og på den måde holdt skindet på næsen (make ends meet).
Sidste sommer blev vi inviteret til en fest i huset; nogle naboer var også bedt om at komme, og da vi dukkede op, blev vi modtaget med åbne arme. Vejret var ikke så godt, så de havde kedet sig (be bored) og havde tømt adskillige glas, før vi ankom.
Det blev en fed fest - selvom et par af naboerne blev kørt (take) på hospitalet. Vi er kommet hjem i god behold (safely) og har allerede planlagt vores næste besøg hos (to) vennerne.
Engelsk:
Our friends, Brenda and Brian, have just went on vacation (holiday); they have driven to there cottage, which they have had for a few years. The House has been bullied for 14 years ago and when it was finished, it was sold to Brendas mother. Later the mother is dead and Brenda was overtaken the house.
It has been painted und repaired a few times and they have also tried to sell it, but no-one has the wish to buy it; the times have been difficult.
When they have had it for a few years they was agreed to keep it. They have sometimes went it out to tourists and that way they have make the ends meet.
Last summer we were invited to a party in the house; some neighbours were asked to come, and we were arrived, we have been received with open arms. The weather is not so good, sow they have be bored and have quite a few empty glasses before we arrived.
It was a great party – (selvom) one par of the neighbours has been taking to the hospital. We are home in safely and have already planned our next visit to our friends.
På forhånd tak - det er vigtigt.
Svar #1
07. marts 2007 af BoWie (Slettet)
Our friends, Brenda and Brian, have just went on vacation; they have driven to their cottage, which they have had for a few years. The house was built 14 years ago, and when it was finished, it was sold to Brendas mother. Later the mother is dead and Brenda has taken over the house.
It has been painted and repaired a few times and they have also tried to sell it, but nobody wishes to buy it; the times have been difficult.
Det var starten men det ikke helt korrekt"!
It has been painted and repaired a few times and they have also tried to sell it, but nobody wishes to buy it; the times have been difficult.
Det var starten men det ikke helt korrekt"!
Svar #2
07. marts 2007 af tobiasgress (Slettet)
Our friends, Brenda and Brian, have just went on vacation. They have driven to their cottage, which they have had for a few years. The house was built 14 years ago, and when it was finished, it was sold to Brenda's mother. Later the mother died and Brenda has now taken over the house.
It has been painted and repaired a few times, and Brenda and Brian have even tried to sell it, but no one has yet had the wish to buy it. (Valgte at slette "times have been difficult, da det ikke rigtigt giver mening uden opfølgning. Why have the times been difficult? Economy problems, or...?)
After they had owned the house for a few years, they decided to keep it. It has been rented to tourists, which has helped with the economic issues concerning the house. (ends meet er ikke et engelsk udtryk)
Last summer we (du burde nok sige "me and...." siden du ikke har introduceret "we" endnu) were invited to a party being held in the house. Brenda and Brian had invited some of their neighbours, including us (vil jeg tro, hvis "we" er naboer) and we were met by open arms upon our arrival. The weather had not been that good that day; the guests had been bored and turned to the drinks, and quite a few glasses had been emptied before we got there.
It was a great party though (dog), eventhough (selvom) a pair of the neighbours had to be taken to the hospital. (Ehm, forklaring her ville nok give mere mening)
Nothing happened to us though, and we have already planned our next visit with our new friends.
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