Engelsk
Korrekt?
15. marts 2007 af
Hans4444 (Slettet)
Nogen som vil se om det er korrekt, da jeg er lidt usikkker. Den korrekte version er den danske.
Dansk:
The Shining Mountain er et moderne eventyr om en far, der vil have, at hans datter skal være ligeså hårdfør, stolt og stærk, som han er. Hun må ikke være ligesom de andre almindelige piger i Skotland. Hun skal være usædvanlig. Pigen er bange for at skuffe sin far, der er en berømt bjergbestiger. Da faderen tager hende med til the Shining Mountain, fortæller hun ham derfor ikke, at hun er bange og træt og svag. Til sidst, da bjerggudinden får faderen til at tro, at han har mistet sin datter, fordi hun var bange for at skuffe ham, forstår han sin fejltagelse. Da bryder han sammen og græder, skammer Pangma-La sig ikke længere, og nu er hun ikke længere bange for at skuffe sin far.
Engelsk:
The Shining Mountain is a modern adventure about a father, which wants his daughter to be just as tough, proud and strong as he is. She can not be like the other regular girls in Scotland. She has to be unusual. The girl s afraid to disappoint her father, who is a famous mountaineer. When her father takes her to the shining mountain, therefore her doesn’t tell him that’s she is afraid and tired and weak. At last, when the mountain goddess makes the father believe that he has lost his daughter, because she was afraid to disappoint him, he understands his mistake, he brakes down and cries, Pangma-la is no more ashamed, and she is no longer afraid to disappoint her father.
Dansk:
The Shining Mountain er et moderne eventyr om en far, der vil have, at hans datter skal være ligeså hårdfør, stolt og stærk, som han er. Hun må ikke være ligesom de andre almindelige piger i Skotland. Hun skal være usædvanlig. Pigen er bange for at skuffe sin far, der er en berømt bjergbestiger. Da faderen tager hende med til the Shining Mountain, fortæller hun ham derfor ikke, at hun er bange og træt og svag. Til sidst, da bjerggudinden får faderen til at tro, at han har mistet sin datter, fordi hun var bange for at skuffe ham, forstår han sin fejltagelse. Da bryder han sammen og græder, skammer Pangma-La sig ikke længere, og nu er hun ikke længere bange for at skuffe sin far.
Engelsk:
The Shining Mountain is a modern adventure about a father, which wants his daughter to be just as tough, proud and strong as he is. She can not be like the other regular girls in Scotland. She has to be unusual. The girl s afraid to disappoint her father, who is a famous mountaineer. When her father takes her to the shining mountain, therefore her doesn’t tell him that’s she is afraid and tired and weak. At last, when the mountain goddess makes the father believe that he has lost his daughter, because she was afraid to disappoint him, he understands his mistake, he brakes down and cries, Pangma-la is no more ashamed, and she is no longer afraid to disappoint her father.
Svar #1
15. marts 2007 af Katrine (Slettet)
which bruges om ting, who om personer.
Jeg vil bruge 'exceptional' i stedet for 'unusual' Jeg synes, at 'unusual' har en negativ klang, hvilket der ikke er meningen her.
du mangler lige et i i 'is'
Husk at shining mountain skal være med stort.
En lille omskrivning af sætningen kunne måske være på sin plads:
That is why she dos not tell him that she is afraid and tired and weak, when he takes her to the Shining Mountain.
Seperer de to efterfølgende sætninger;
When he breaks (brake = bremser, break = bryde, ødelægge) dowm and cry, Pangma-La does not feel ashamed anymore and she is no longer afraid to dissapoint her father.
Jeg vil bruge 'exceptional' i stedet for 'unusual' Jeg synes, at 'unusual' har en negativ klang, hvilket der ikke er meningen her.
du mangler lige et i i 'is'
Husk at shining mountain skal være med stort.
En lille omskrivning af sætningen kunne måske være på sin plads:
That is why she dos not tell him that she is afraid and tired and weak, when he takes her to the Shining Mountain.
Seperer de to efterfølgende sætninger;
When he breaks (brake = bremser, break = bryde, ødelægge) dowm and cry, Pangma-La does not feel ashamed anymore and she is no longer afraid to dissapoint her father.
Svar #2
15. marts 2007 af Hans4444 (Slettet)
#1:
Er den korrekt nu, er i tvivl om det sidste!
Engelsk:
The Shining Mountain is a modern adventure about a father, who wants his daughter to be just as tough, proud and strong as he is. She can not be like the other regular girls in Scotland. She has to be exceptionel. The girl is afraid to disappoint her father, who is a famous mountaineer.
That is why she does not tell him that she is afraid and tired and weak, when he takes her to the Shining Mountain.
At last, when the mountain goddess makes the father believe that he has lost his daughter, he breaks down and cry, Pangma-La does not feel ashamed anymore and she is no longer afraid to disappoint her father.
Er den korrekt nu, er i tvivl om det sidste!
Engelsk:
The Shining Mountain is a modern adventure about a father, who wants his daughter to be just as tough, proud and strong as he is. She can not be like the other regular girls in Scotland. She has to be exceptionel. The girl is afraid to disappoint her father, who is a famous mountaineer.
That is why she does not tell him that she is afraid and tired and weak, when he takes her to the Shining Mountain.
At last, when the mountain goddess makes the father believe that he has lost his daughter, he breaks down and cry, Pangma-La does not feel ashamed anymore and she is no longer afraid to disappoint her father.
Svar #3
15. marts 2007 af Katrine (Slettet)
Du mangler faktisk et komma efter 'proud'
Jeg vil helst se, at du opdeler den sidste sætning i to, så den ikke bliver for lang. Altså punktum mellem mistake og When.
Jeg vil helst se, at du opdeler den sidste sætning i to, så den ikke bliver for lang. Altså punktum mellem mistake og When.
Svar #4
15. marts 2007 af Hans4444 (Slettet)
#3:
Opdateret.
Korrekt nu?
Engelsk:
The Shining Mountain is a modern adventure about a father, who wants his daughter to be just as tough, proud, and strong as he is. She can not be like the other regular girls in Scotland. She has to be exceptionel. The girl is afraid to disappoint her father, who is a famous mountaineer.
That is why she does not tell him that she is afraid and tired and weak, when he takes her to the Shining Mountain. At last, when the mountain goddess makes the father believe that he has lost his daughter, because she was afraid to disappoint him, he understands his mistake. When he breaks down and cry, Pangma-La does not feel ashamed anymore and she is no longer afraid to disappoint her father.
Opdateret.
Korrekt nu?
Engelsk:
The Shining Mountain is a modern adventure about a father, who wants his daughter to be just as tough, proud, and strong as he is. She can not be like the other regular girls in Scotland. She has to be exceptionel. The girl is afraid to disappoint her father, who is a famous mountaineer.
That is why she does not tell him that she is afraid and tired and weak, when he takes her to the Shining Mountain. At last, when the mountain goddess makes the father believe that he has lost his daughter, because she was afraid to disappoint him, he understands his mistake. When he breaks down and cry, Pangma-La does not feel ashamed anymore and she is no longer afraid to disappoint her father.
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