Engelsk på A ! To korte artikler

Hejsa allesammen, jeg har her skrevet to kortere artikler udfra et stykke, jeg har læst. Den ene skulle fylde max. 300 ord og være Broadsheet og den anden max. 100 ord og være Tabloid.
Jeg har tit mange sproglige fejl i form af akavede vendinger og stavefejl, derfor ville det gøre mig meget glad, hvis en venlig sjæl (eller flere) ville kigge min tekst igennem. Derudover, er jeg heller ikke så god til at dele tekster op i afsnit.. og ved egentligt heller ikke om så korte tektster som disse burde..
Det er måske en lidt drøj teksterne, når der er to og den ene længere, men sproget er meget enkelt og burde være lige til. Ellers.. Så er lidt hjælp bedre end ingen ! ;D
Jeg aflevere denne tirsdag, så alle besvarelser inden da vil være mig til behjælpelighed.
OBS: Jeg har engelsk på højere niveau.

Broadsheet:
It sounded like one of those horrific thrillers, when a nightmare became real for neighbours at a residential street in London yesterday evening around 8 p.m. Horrible screams made them run to their windows and call the police. They were all terrified. In one of those lovely small houses at the residential street a seemingly normal and harmonious family experienced what no one ever could imagine would happen to a family like this. The family’s youngest daughter Kate Winter went nuts with a bread knife. She stabbed her father Gerald Winter a serial of times and ended up murdered him. He was so badly hurt, that he was bleed to death in a very short time. Kate’s mother Dolly Winter tried to stop her, but Kate injured her so badly. The police arrested Kate, before she could harm her mother further. Dolly is outside of mortal danger, but has got serious damaged on her body mainly deep knife wounds.
“I don’t believe that such a thing like this could happen! Our friendly, lovely, quiet street! Well, it doesn’t surprise me, that if something like this should happen, it was Kate doing it, sorry to say it. She was just beginning to scare us all with her abnormal behaviour. I mean, sometimes when we said hello to her, she would smile back and keep on going.. But then other days she would stop and keep starring vicious and accusing at us, until we would hurry up turn away. She is frightening!”
Other sources could confirm, that Kate is having a mentally disease and have repeating spent months on hospitals and centres course of this. Her illness is not proved, but it is said to be some sort of psychotic schizophrenic with a very unstable mind. If she had the right help, would this then had happened?

Tabloid:
Gerald Winter was killed yesterday evening around 8 p.m. by his own daughter, who stabbed him a serial of times with a bread knife, which lead him bleeding to death. Gerald’s wife Dolly tried to interrupt and stop the daughter, but ended up being stabbed and badly injured. Some neighbours heard screams and called the police, who unfortunately did not come in time to rescue Gerald. But Dolly is outside of mortal danger. The daughter Kate Winter was arrested immediately. The neighbours was not that choked, that the young Kate was the one freaking out with a knife. She was mentally ill and had some sort of psychotic schizophrenic with a very unstable mind.


P.S. Hvis I har nogle rigtige gode ideér til artiklernes overskrifter, vil jeg meget meget gerne høre! Jeg tænker og tænker selv.. Men synes ikke at have fundet nogen brugbare endnu.

På forhånd mange mange tak !