account? er jeg galt på den?

Jeg har en stil for hvor 2. opgave lyder: Give a brief account of the view of man versus nature as it appears in the extract from 'Lines Composed a Few Miles Above Tintern Abbey'

Digtet:

... for I have learned
to look on nature, not as in the hour
of thoughtless youth; but hearing oftentimes
the still sad music of humanity,
nor harsh nor grating, though of ample power
to chasten and subdue. And I have felt
a presence that disturbs me with the joy
of elevated thoughts: a sense sublime
of something far more deeply interfused,
whose dwelling is the light of setting suns,
and the round ocean and the living air,
and the blue sky, and in mind of man:
a motion and a spirit, that impels
all thinking things, all objects of all thought,
and rolls through things.

Min redegørelse:

William Wordsworth writes in his poem Lines Composed a Few Miles Above Tintern Abbey about his understanding of the nature. His view has changed. It is not the same as it used to be when he was young. Now he thinks that the nature posses great power and ability to chasten and subdue. He is disturbed with a presence of elevation. To him the nature is sublime. The nature is sunsets, oceans, air and the blue sky. Everything that is beautiful and perfect. His opinion about all thinking things is, that they are impelled by motion and spirit. He describes nature as if it was some sort of God.


Er det helt misforstået?
Jeg er lige gået fra B til A-niveau, og det er godt nok noget af et spring!

Jeg håber virkelig i gider at se hurtigt på det, og lige kommentere mine fejl!!

På forhånd tak.