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24. september 2007 af mis90 (Slettet)
Nogle der vil rette ?? Og oversætte tre ord, som jeg ikk hvad betyder på eng..

Poem;
We have read, and write poems.Where the first should rhyme, and the second should not rhyme. It was about love.
Song: Elvis presly
He sends a letter, but get always a answer with 'Return to sender', adress unknown, No such person, no such zone. He waits helpless. So he tries in another way, where he then sends it on email. But he gets the same answer. He doesn't gets a answer about his love. It is a rhyme song.

Fatima and Saret;

They love each other, but they are not allowed, definitely Fatima. Cause they have two differents culture. Fatima's aunt will have, that Fatima shall meets with Ali's boy. But that says her mom quickly no to. Her aunt asks Fatima if they learn anything in school, which you have to use when you get married e.g. Such like clean, make food etc. She thinks that it is to stupid, to go in school. When you don't learn things like that. Fatimas mom says that she not shall meets with ali's boy, cause she helps her at home. Between Fatima and Saret, is it call forbidden love.

Romeo and Juliet;

About Romeo and Juliet, is it different. Cause they are enemies. Romeo sends a letter to Juliet, but she doesn't get the letter. But they get happy married, but the happiness dosen't even hold an hour, then has Romeo against his will end in a bloody, (sindsoprivende opgør) with some of his worst enemies, and he gets exile after he had murder (ærke) enemy Tybalt. Now is the love divided, and no one outstretched arms when each other. Without each other is Romeo and Juliet nothing worth, so they try in all ways again to be together, but the distiny will, that they first find together in the dead.

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24. september 2007 af mis90 (Slettet)

Heeelp me . Skal aflevere den imorgen.

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25. september 2007 af josemaria (Slettet)

Poem;
We have read, and write (written)poems.Where the first should rhyme, and the second should not rhyme. It was about love.
Song: Elvis presly
He sends a letter, but //get always a answer with// (he always gets an answer with the title) 'Return to sender', adress unknown, No such person, no such zone. He waits helpless. So (Then) he tries in another way, where he sends it on email. But he gets the same answer. He doesn't gets (get an) a answer about his love. It is a rhyme song.

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25. september 2007 af josemaria (Slettet)

Fatima and Saret;

They love each other, but they are not allowed (to), definitely Fatima. Cause they have two differents (different) culture(cultures). Fatima's aunt will have, that Fatima shall meets (meet) with Ali's boy. But that says her mom quickly no to. Her aunt asks Fatima if they learn anything in school, which you (she) have to use when you (she) get (gets) married e.g. Such like clean, make food etc. She thinks that it is to (too) stupid, to go in (to) school. When she don't (doesn't) learn things like that. Fatimas(Fatima's) mom says that she //not shall meets with ali's boy, cause she helps her at home.// (Shall not meet with Ali's boy, because she rather should stay at home and help her mother).Between Fatima and Saret, is it call (called) forbidden love.

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25. september 2007 af josemaria (Slettet)

Romeo and Juliet;

About Romeo and Juliet, is it (it is) different. Cause (Because) they are enemies.(Er Julie og Romeo fjender? Det er nemlig det du skriver her.) Romeo sends a letter to Juliet, but* she doesn't get the letter. But* they get happy (happily) married, but* the happiness dosen't even hold an hour, then does Romeo against his will end in a bloody, (sindsoprivende opgør) with some of his worst enemies, and he gets exile after he had murdered (ærke-arch) enemy Tybalt. Now is the love divided, and no one outstretched arms when each other. (Ikke en (færdig) sætning :s)
Without each other //is// Romeo and Juliet (are) nothing worth, so they try in all ways //again// to be together (again), but the distiny (destiny - fate) will (says), that they first find together (each other)in the dead.

*** Du har tre "but" i starten af tre sætninger i træk. Det lyder ikke for godt.

Ærlig talt burde du bruge mere tid på at rette dine opgaver. Utrolig mange fejl.

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25. september 2007 af josemaria (Slettet)

Elvis Presley*

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