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nogen som vil kigge min lille stil igennem?:)
23. november 2007 af
Skat1 (Slettet)
Tank you for the competition about the futures working place.
I my pleasure to give my quotation for the future working place:
I mean that the working place might think a bid of the young people; because it is the first time they actual are on labour market, they shut learn the labour market first, then they can be good and fast like the seniors.
The perfect working place for young people is something easy, something they present one. It can be Meany thing like an office work / paperwork and something like that, it is something they are (van til) in the school, and therefore it is important to them to start at something they know something about.
From my own experience, I will like to work with computers, because it is something I have in my everyday life and it is something I know about, therefore is it something I will be able to work with, with a interest in because I know it from my everyday life.
So the perfect working place is, a working place which you are familiar with, like something you have interest in, and if the young people get jobs like that the will not be disappointing fore the employers. I think that young people is good workers, if they wound to work hard, but some wound and some don’t.
I mean it is not everyone who means everyone else owes them a living.
It is my pleasure to send this E-mail to you about my meaning and I will hope to hear back from them.
Yours faithfully
Kim Hansen
High-school student
I my pleasure to give my quotation for the future working place:
I mean that the working place might think a bid of the young people; because it is the first time they actual are on labour market, they shut learn the labour market first, then they can be good and fast like the seniors.
The perfect working place for young people is something easy, something they present one. It can be Meany thing like an office work / paperwork and something like that, it is something they are (van til) in the school, and therefore it is important to them to start at something they know something about.
From my own experience, I will like to work with computers, because it is something I have in my everyday life and it is something I know about, therefore is it something I will be able to work with, with a interest in because I know it from my everyday life.
So the perfect working place is, a working place which you are familiar with, like something you have interest in, and if the young people get jobs like that the will not be disappointing fore the employers. I think that young people is good workers, if they wound to work hard, but some wound and some don’t.
I mean it is not everyone who means everyone else owes them a living.
It is my pleasure to send this E-mail to you about my meaning and I will hope to hear back from them.
Yours faithfully
Kim Hansen
High-school student
Svar #1
23. november 2007 af Knütschen (Slettet)
Jeg tror godt jeg kan nå at kigge den igennem i morgen (lørdag) inden jeg skal til hannover. Du har den senest kl 6:30, hvis jeg når det ;-)
Svar #2
24. november 2007 af Kinga (Slettet)
Hejsa
For det føste fik jeg lige af vide af min engelsk lærer at når man skal sige: jeg mener på engelsk, er det mest korrekt at bruge: i think.. :)
Ellers har lige nogle staverettelser:)
Shut: skulle - should
Meany thing: mange ting - many things
vant til: used to
to them, rettes til for them
du har skrevet: "the will not be disappointing fore the employers", mener det hedder: they will not be disappointed fore their employees (evt. slå ordet op:)
wound: vil - want
Sådan, det var lige dem jeg fik øjepå, håber det kan hjælpe diig :)
Hilsen Kinga
For det føste fik jeg lige af vide af min engelsk lærer at når man skal sige: jeg mener på engelsk, er det mest korrekt at bruge: i think.. :)
Ellers har lige nogle staverettelser:)
Shut: skulle - should
Meany thing: mange ting - many things
vant til: used to
to them, rettes til for them
du har skrevet: "the will not be disappointing fore the employers", mener det hedder: they will not be disappointed fore their employees (evt. slå ordet op:)
wound: vil - want
Sådan, det var lige dem jeg fik øjepå, håber det kan hjælpe diig :)
Hilsen Kinga
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