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13. januar 2008 af
ilubabs (Slettet)
_ jeg har skrevet min historie om rigtig mange gang og er ved at bilve sindsyg så er der nogle der kan rette lidt i den nu??
It was the 29th of November, the night before the 30th of November, 1990 . That night was not funny for anyone. It was the meanings at I should flew to Hawaii, but crashed down on a deserted island. It was extreme weather with heavy rain and thunderstorm. My aeroplane was not easy to steer. The aeroplane had the control over me as it was swaying around without me involvement.
Suddenly losed I the Control over the aeroplane, and the aeroplane had the course down at a island. I panicked and told in the loudspeaker “ all should hold on to. I don’t remember how the aeroplane crashed, because the realized so fast. I waked up, after one or tow time, firm in tow logs, it was not so though. I lies there in one or tow. My aeroplane was away and all the passengers too. I don’t know what I should do now.
It was the 29th of November, the night before the 30th of November, 1990 . That night was not funny for anyone. It was the meanings at I should flew to Hawaii, but crashed down on a deserted island. It was extreme weather with heavy rain and thunderstorm. My aeroplane was not easy to steer. The aeroplane had the control over me as it was swaying around without me involvement.
Suddenly losed I the Control over the aeroplane, and the aeroplane had the course down at a island. I panicked and told in the loudspeaker “ all should hold on to. I don’t remember how the aeroplane crashed, because the realized so fast. I waked up, after one or tow time, firm in tow logs, it was not so though. I lies there in one or tow. My aeroplane was away and all the passengers too. I don’t know what I should do now.
Svar #1
13. januar 2008 af Alethea (Slettet)
Nogle steder var jeg lidt i tvivl om hvad du ville, men jeg har da rettet nogle steder, og tilføjet andet, for at det kunne lyde bedre, håber du kan bruge det!
It was the 29th of November, the night before the 30th of November 1990 . That night became unforgettable for everyone. I was supposed to fly to Hawaii, but the flight crashed down on a deserted island. The weather was unfortunately as bad as the flight-crash, with heavy rain and thunderstorm. My aeroplane was not easy to steer. The aeroplane had the control over me as it was swaying around totally out of control.
Suddenly I lost the control over the aeroplane, and the aeroplane was about to crash down somewhere that looked like to be an island. I panicked and said through the loudspeaker: “hold on people". I don’t remember how the aeroplane crashed, because it all happened so quickly. I woke up, after one or two hours, firm in tow logs(?), it was not so though. I lay there maybe for a couple of days, I couldn't remember what day it was. My aeroplane was all destroyed, so was the passengers, it was a desaster a totally heart-breaking experience, that I has effected me very deeply. Now, i'm all alone, and do not know what to do...
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