fremlæggelse hjælp :D

skal fremlægge på onsdag, så ville være dejligt hvis nogen ville kigge de gramatiske fejl igennem.
bare giv mig hint til fejlene :)

I was in Italy with my family and my boyfriend. We were on the campsite called San’t Angelo. It is the most beautiful campsite ever, There are colouring beautiful flowers everywhere, and the biggest pool. I love to spend my holiday there. We have been there in 4 years now. My parents love the place and so do my brothers and my sister.
In this year I flew to Italy with my boyfriend, we were living in a tent this year, and my parents in an apartment. It was really great whether all the time, from 32-45 degrees.
When we have been there in one day we meet some friends from Denmark. That was really funny to meet someone you know from Denmark in Italy.
We were together with the other couple every day, and almost every night we took on the biggest Disco in Cavalino called Empire. It is the biggest and coolest Disco, half of it is outdoors with palms and fountains, and the other half there is a big dance floor, which is pink.
Some nights they made a party called “Dansker aften”, where we heard Danish music all night, and all Danish people got free entrance. Other nights they made a party called: “skum fest”, it was very fun, everybody was wearing their swimsuits and the foam was to my stomach.
When my boyfriend and I have been there for two weeks, he should take the plain home, but I stayed there. My father came to our campsite, and took me and my brother to another campsite two kilometres away from sant Angelo. Then I stayed with my father and his girlfriend and my brother in two weeks. It was the best vacation ever. And many asks, oh were you in italy for a whole month, wasn’t it too much?! If it was me, I would miss Denmark and then I really want to go home after two weeks. But my answer is, no you can never get enough of Italy and the great weather. I simply love it.

VH :)