Engelsk, hjælp :'(

vil du ikk lige hurtigt rette den igennem :)'
og give en karakter som vil passe til en elev i 8. klasse, self til denne stil.


It was the 29th of November the night before 30th of November, 1990. That
night became unforgettable for everyone. I was supposed to fly to Singapore, but the flight crashed down on a deserted island. The weather was unfortunately as bad as the flight-crash, with heavy rain and thunderstorm. My aeroplane was not easy to steer. The aeroplane had the control over me as it was swaying around totally out of control.
Suddenly I lost the control over the aeroplane, and there was fire in the motor and the aeroplane was about to crash down somewhere that looked like to be an country. I panicked and said through the loudspeaker: “hold on people". I don’t remember how the aeroplane crashed, because it all happened so quickly. I woke up, after one or two hours. It's a miracle that I survived. I lay there maybe for a couple of days, I couldn't remember what day it was. I looked around and couldn’t find my aeroplane. My aeroplane was away and where is all the passengers. I looked around again and found myself along. Then I saw a man, he came closer and closer. I was scared, but suddenly he took my hand and told me he had survive the crash. I was very surprised and tired. I barely could feel my feet. He told me that there had been a life team for fetch all the passengers, but they couldn't find 24 in live. This man I told with was goes again and now I’m along again . Even if I couldn't feel my feet, I forced myself to stand up and walk, I goes into at town I think, there wasn’t people. I don’t what I have to should do with myself. I goes down at street for find a hotel or something’s other thing. Then I have goes in many hours, I finally find a little house, there I could sleep for to night.
Then I was coming into a room, where I could sleep, goes I to the bet, because I was very tired.