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Hjælp til korrekt grammatik:

27. april 2008 af Eagle-Eye (Slettet)
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When the Europeans came to Australia, they took most of the aboriginals as slaves. And later the Australian authorities took the aboriginal children to camps, where they had to work, as they hoped to separate the children from the aboriginal culture, in order to stop the aboriginal race to evolve, simply by uniting the aboriginal people with the white people. Then the aboriginal woman would give birth to a half-aboriginal, and the half-aboriginal would give birth to a quarter-aboriginal, and suddenly the 100% aboriginal would not exist. Back in the days – in the 20’Th century, aboriginal people with good skills had a hard time getting a job, there was an obvious discrimination against the aboriginal people (the black people), comparable to the race-war that were in the USA, and the apartheid in South Africa.

But not so many years ago, the Australian government made it illegal to prefer the white people from the black people in public, for instance among people (both black and white) in search of work. On the 13th of February 2008, Australian government offered a formal apology to the aboriginal who were forced to stay at the camps.

Hvis der er fejl, må I meget gerne pointere dem.

JL

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Svar #1
27. april 2008 af hackerjohn (Slettet)

"Haster" & "hjælp" er bandlyst i overskrifter.. alt haster jo i bund og grund i denne fortravlede verden!

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27. april 2008 af gfjtz (Slettet)

#1 - Nu indeholder overskriften da heller ikke ordet "haster", og selvom der står hjælp, er det jo ikke brugt i en "hjælp!!!!!!!"-sammenhæng. Overskriften siger jo noget om indlægget.

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27. april 2008 af Beki (Slettet)

When the Europeans came to Australia, they took most of A as slaves. And later the Australian authorities took the aboriginal children to camps, where they had to work, as they hoped to separate the children from the aboriginal culture, in order to stop the aboriginal race to evolve, simply by uniting the aboriginal people with the white people. Then the aboriginal woman would give birth to a half-aboriginal, and the half-aboriginal would give birth to a quarter-aboriginal, and suddenly the Aborigines would extinct (100% aboriginal would not exist). Back in the 20’Th century, aboriginal people with good skills had a hard time getting a job, there was an obvious discrimination against the aboriginal people (the black people), comparable to the race-war that were in the USA, and the apartheid in South Africa.

Ifølge ordbogen skal det hedde: the Aborigines ikke aboriginals?
men det må du lige kigge på selv..

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Svar #4
27. april 2008 af hackerjohn (Slettet)

#2 nej men jeg citerer bare retningslinjerne..

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