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heej!  Jeg er ikke så god til den engelske grammatik. Er der en der vil rette dette korte summary igennem:)

This article deals with the murder of the only 10-year-old boy Damilola. The article takes place in the inner-city London. Here its everyday life, carrying knives, taking drugs and stealing. In the gang culture, peer pressure and bulling makes only 12 and 13 year old commit crimes, and drop school. The kids have no respect to the police or any adults at all, and it makes it hard investigating the murderer. But after the murderer the police begin the hunt for the killer, because until now nothing has been done.

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