Engelsk opgave

prøv da at smække dem op, så kan vi jo kigge på det :)

Uuups sorry glemte at sætte dem ind min fejl her er de:

1.) Because of the fact that farming has become increasingly intensive, and very globalised and large scaled, have made the breeding so intensive as letting chickens living whole of their live in a small space of an A4 sheet of paper. This little space and compressed environment makes it easy for diseases to spread.

2.) Food processors want large quantities of animals at specific times, the text says that this is suited to cause intensive farming with use of synthetic chemicals. The text also points out that because people buy so much processed ready meals, make them forget the important need for proper cooking and homemade food, this is the reason which leads to potential for food poisoning, where the text says that this problem is rising steadily in Britain. Food processing further separate the population from the farm. The texts points out that many children doesn’t know how food is made.

3.) The text tells that in the last 20 years the distance food has increased with 50%, because of long distances to the slaughter has made it very easy for outbreaks of diseases to occur. The text tells some serious facts such as transportation of meat between distances of 21,000 km. In order to preserve the food between big distances the food must be heavily, processed, packaged or chemically preserved.

4.) The picture is trying to show u show we produce our meat in a very harsh way, but on the other way it gives a good look of the reality of how our food is mass-produced, the illustration shows how we end a life by pressing on a button, and how the product comes out packed and preserved ready for sale.

Anybody?

Udmiddelbart ser det fint ud selvom u= you, men er heller ikke så skarp til engelsk så der er sandsynligvis nogle fejl.

Der er en spandfuld fejl, uden at jeg dog er ved at tisse i bukserne.

Se eksempelvis følgende:

"Because of the fact that farming has become increasingly intensive, and very globalised and large scaled, have made the breeding so intensive as letting chickens living whole of their live in a small space of an A4 sheet of paper."

... jeg snakker her om ,have made... samt "whole of their" ... samt logisk flertal/stavefejl "live" osv.

Ok tak kan du ikke vise mig alle de fejl du udmiddelbart kan se, for det skal nemlig afleveres imorgen.

På forhånd tak.

1.) the fact that farming has become increasingly intensive, and very globalised and large scaled, HAS made breeding so intensive THAT letting chickens LIVE their WHOLE liveS in a small space THE SIZE OF A4 sheet of paper IS NORMAL. This little space and compressed environment makes it easy for diseases to spread.

2.) Food processors want large quantities of animals at specific times, the text says that this is suited to cause intensive farming with use of synthetic chemicals(jeg har ingen ide om, hvad det er du mener). The text also points out that because people buy A LOT OF processed ready meals,IT makeS them forget the important need for proper cooking and homemade food, this leads to potential food poisoning, where the text says that this problem is rising steadily in Britain. Food processing further separate the population from the farm. The texts point out that many children DO NOT know how food is made.

3.) The text STATES that in the last 20 years the distance food has increased BY 50%, because of long distances to the slaughterHOUSES, THIS has ALSO made it very easy for outbreaks of diseases to occur. The text tells some serious facts such as transportation of meat OVER A distance of 21,000 km. In order to preserve the food OVER SUCH LONG distances the food must be heavily, processed, packaged or chemically preserved.

4.) The picture is trying to show uS THAT we produce our meat in a very harsh way, but on the other HAND it gives a good look of the reality of how our food is mass-produced, the illustration shows how we end a life by pressing a button, and how the product comes out packed and preserved ready for sale.

Nogen steder kan jeg slet ikke forstå, hvad det er du mener, men jeg har rettet det, så det er forståeligt for mig....
Pas på med kongruens og ellers kig på de andre ting jeg har rettet...
held og lykke;O)