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Gramatisk korrekt?

26. august 2009 af NejTilSvampe

Nogen som vil rette den her oversættelse lynhurtigt? på forhånd tak :)

 Last morning at 09.30 a younger male tried to grab an elderly woman’s handbag, as she walked on the pavement at the front of the bank. The man, who was on a bicycle, was forced to give up his attempt, due to the woman’s firm grip of the handbag. Few minutes later he succeeded in grabbing a bag from another woman’s handlebar basket, she hardly realized what had happened before it was too late and he had disappeared around the nearest street corner. Therefore the woman could not give a description of the man. Since the robber hasn’t been apprehended yet, the police are hoping they can get help from possible witnesses, so they can capture him as soon as possible.


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26. august 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)

 (Last) Yesterday morning at 09.30 a (younger) youngish male tried to (grab) snatch an elderly woman’s handbag(,) as she was (walked) walking on the pavement (at the) in front of the bank. The man, who was on (a) bicycle, (was forced) had to give up his attempt(, due to) because of the woman’s firm grip of the handbag. (Few)A few minutes later he (succeeded in) managed to grab(bing) a bag from another woman’s handlebar basket(,). (s)She hardly realized what had happened before it was too late and he had disappeared (a)round the nearest street corner.  The woman could not  therefore not give a description of the man. (Since t)The robber hasn’t been apprehended yet, and  the police (are) hope(ing) they can get help from possible witnesses(,) so they can capture (him) the thief as soon as possible.


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Svar #2
28. august 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)

"realize" er amerikansk.

"realise" er engelsk.


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