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Hjælp til oversætning fra dansk til engelsk! (8 linjer)

01. oktober 2009 af Maskinen (Slettet) - Niveau: B-niveau

Kære Studieportalen, jeg sidder her med en tekst der skal oversættes, jeg har lavet oversættelsen så godt jeg end nu kunne, men det kunne jo være der sad nogle kongruens-hajer derude, og kunne spotte en fejl, eller blot finde et andet svar eller anden løsning. På forhånd tak ;)

Danske tekst der skal oversættes Au pair I England
Den engelske middelklasse har fået et dårligt ry, hvis man skal tro på en rapport, som fornylig er blevet offentliggjort. En organisation, som hedder ’International Youth Welfare’, og London University har lavet rapporten sammen, af materiale, som er indsamlet fra spørgeskemaer, udsendt til Ca. 1500 au
pair piger i forskellige dele af England. Tre fjerdedele af skemaerne blev returneret, og viste nogle ubehagelige facts om hvordan unge piger, der kommer til England for at lære sproget, bliver behandlet. Der er ofte stor forskel mellem det, de unge piger får at vide inden de rejser, og den måde de bliver behandlet på af deres værtsfamilier i England. Et stort antal siger, at de kun tjener £9 om ugen, at de arbejder Ca. 50 timer om ugen, og en masse af dem spiser ikke med familien og får ikke mad nok.

Min oversættelse af ovenstående tekst Au pair in England
The English middle class have gotten a bad reputation, if you have to believe on a report, there just recently have been published. An organization, which is called ‘International Youth Welfare’ and London University have made a report together, by material who have been collected from questionnaires, send out to about 1500 au pair girls in different parts of England. Three quarters of the questionnaires returned, and showed some unpleasant facts about how young girls, who came to England to learn the language, get treated. There is often a big difference between what, the young girls get to know before they leave, and the way they get treated by their host families in England. A large number says, that they only make about £9 a week, that they work approximately 50 hours per week, and a lot of them do not eat meals with the family and do not get enough food.
 


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Svar #1
01. oktober 2009 af exatb

The English middle class have gotten has got a bad reputation if you have are to believe on a report there just recently have which has been published recently. An organization which is called ‘International Youth Welfare’ and London University have made a report together by material who have been collected from questionnaires sent out to about 1500 au pair girls in different parts of England. Three quarters of the questionnaires were returned and showed some unpleasant facts about how young girls who come to England to learn the language get are treated. Often there is often a big difference between what the young girls get to know are told before they leave and the way they get are treated by their host families in England. A large number say(s) that they only make about £9 a week, that they work approximately 50 hours per week, and a lot of them do not eat meals with the family and do not get enough food.
 


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Svar #2
02. oktober 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)

 "has gotten"  er amerikansk, -ikke engelsk

"..have made a report together" er nok lige lovlig meget danglish.   -Sig hellere "........have mad a joint report"

-ikke "by material", men "from material"

"in different parts of England"   er ikke rystende ukorrekt, men brug hellere  "In various parts of England"

brug   "do not have their meals with....."


Svar #3
02. oktober 2009 af Maskinen (Slettet)

Jamen, det ser alt sammen meget fint ud, har lært efter mine fejl, så siger mange tak. (:


Svar #4
02. oktober 2009 af Maskinen (Slettet)

Hej igen, til dem der har hjulpet mig og ønsker at se den korrekte oversætning er den her:

If you are to believe a recently published report, the English middle class has acquired a lousy reputation. An organization which is called International Youth Welfare and the University of London have cooperated in compiling the report from information, which has been collected from questionnaires that were sent out to approximately 1500 au pair girls in different parts of England. Three fourths of the questionnaires were returned and they revealed some unpleasant facts about how young girls, who come to England to learn the language, are treated. Quite often there is a considerable distance between what the young girls are told before they leave home and the way they are treated by their host families in England. A great number of girls say that they only make £9 a week; that they work around 50 hours a week, and that many of them do not eat with the family and do not receive sufficient food.
 


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