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Rette meget kort (8 linjer) tekst?

06. februar 2010 af 1g (Slettet)

Opgaven er at oversætte fra dansk til engelsk. Jeg har oversat den korte tekst, så er der nogen der vil rette den engelske tekst??

Den danske:

Sen oprejsning til verdenskriger
Den britiske matematiker Alan Turing har fået oprejsning med 57 års forsinkelse. Han ydede under Anden Verdenskrig en vigtig indsats med at knække tyske koder og fik reddet mange menneskeliv. Men han levede åbent som homoseksuel, og i 1952 blev der rejst sag mod ham for ´uterligt forhold´. Han fik valget mellem fængsel eller behandling med østrogen. Han valgte det sidste – og begik selvmord i 1954. Forleden blev han udnævnt til Officer of the British Empire, og premierminister Gordon Brown undskyldte på nationens vegne den degraderende behandling. Ceremonien foregik i det tidligere kodebrydningscenter Bletchley Park mellem Oxford og Cambridge, hvor man også har opstillet Stephen Kettles buste af professoren ved krigsarbejdet. Alan Turing figurerer også ved udstillingen ´Gay Icons´ på National Portrait Gallery i London – åben til 18. oktober.
 

Min oversættelse til engelsk:

Late rehabilitation for/to world warrior
The British mathematician Alan Turing has got rehabilitated with a delay of/on 57 years. Under the Second World War he did an important effort with breaking German codes and got saved many human lives. But he lived openly as a homosexual and in the year 1952 there was raise a case against him for ´gross indecency´. He got the choice between prison or treatment with oestrogen. He choose/selected the latter – and he committed suicide in the year 1954. Recently he was appointed to Officer of the British Empire, and Prime Minister Gordon Brown apologized on the nation´s behalf the degrading treatment. The ceremony took place in the earlier/previous code-breaking-centre Bletchley Park between Oxford and Cambridge, where Stephen Kettle´s bust of the professor at the war work also is sat up. Alan Turing also figures at the exhibition ´Gay Icons´ in the National Portrait Gallery in London – open until the 18th October.
 


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06. februar 2010 af Andersen11 (Slettet)

Late rehabilitation of world warrior
The British mathematician Alan Turing has been rehabilitated with a delay of/on 57 years. During the Second World War he made an important effort with breaking German codes and got saved causing many human lives to be saved. But he lived openly as a homosexual and in the year 1952 there was raise a case was brought against him for ´gross indecency´. He got was given the choice between prison or treatment with oestrogen. He choose/selected the latter – and he committed suicide in the year 1954. Recently he was appointed to named an Officer of the British Empire, and Prime Minister Gordon Brown apologized on behalf of the nation´s behalf for the degrading treatment. The ceremony took place in the earlier/previous former code-breaking-centre Bletchley Park between Oxford and Cambridge, where Stephen Kettle´s bust of the professor at the war work also is sat up. Alan Turing also figures at the exhibition ´Gay Icons´ in the National Portrait Gallery in London – which is open until the 18th of October.
 


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