Engelsk handelsbrev

Godaften :)

Jeg har lige lavet et handelsbrev i engelsk, som jeg skal aflevere imorgen. Er lidt usikker på om jeg har skrevet datoerne ordentligt, og om der er nogle kommaer som skal indsættes. Nogen som hurtigt lige vil læse den igennem for evt fejl og mangler?

På forhånd tak :)

Kitchen Utensils Ltd.

High Road 15, Newhampton GF 6SJ, Great Britain
Tel: +44 020 1568778 – www.kitchen utensils.uk

ML/lf
23 August 20-
Manager Ole Svendsen
The Cook and the Server
Høstvej 87
2700 Jægerslund

Delivery of kitchen equipment, your order of 25 July 20-
We are pleased to inform you that the products ordered by 25 July 20- (order number 62387 in our instruction system) are packed and ready for shipment. According to our forwarder will the consignment reach you no later than Tuesday, 29 August 20-.

We hope that you will be satisfied with the products and we will aloud ourselves to contact you in about a month to hear your opinion about the products. If you should be as happy about them as we expect would we be satisfied if we could allowed to state your restaurant as reference.
Invoice nr. 06-9973224 is enclosed. We ask you to please note the terms of payments.

Yours sincerely
Kitchen Utensils Ltd.
Martin Long
Sales Representative