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Kommentar om skolens kantine

04. marts 2011 af Okayyyy - Niveau: B-niveau

Hej, er der nogen der gerne vil rette den her korte tekst?

School’s canteen
I don’t really buy foods in school’s canteen, but I have tasted some from there, I have tasted their burger, pizza and muffin. The burger taste okay, but the steak is smaller than the bread and there not really so much lettuce. I like their pizza really much, it taste so good, and I could never be tired of them and the price is also good.
There are both good and bad things about the canteen. The good things about the canteen are that they have the pizzas and they sell everything like sweets, fruits, cold and warm course. The negative things about the canteen are, their foods are little bit expensive, the canteen is small, and there are few tables and chairs.
I will give the canteen 7 stars out of 10.

Her er det danske:
Skolens kantine
Jeg køber ikke rigtig noget i skolens kantine, men jeg har smagt noget derfra, jeg har smagt deres burger, pizza og muffin. Burgeren smagte godt nok, men bøffen var mindre end brødet og der var dårligt nok salat i. Jeg elsker seriøst deres pizza, den smager så godt, jeg kunne aldrig blive træt af dem og prisen er også godt.
Der er både gode og dårlige ting ved kantinen. Der er gode ting og dårlige ting om kantinen, det der gør den god er deres pizzaer og de sælger alt som f.eks. søde sager, frugt, pasta og varme retter. Der er nok mest negative ting om kantinen, deres mad er lidt dyr, kantinen er lille, der er få borde og stole.

Og en ting til kan I også give mig nogle ideér til hvad jeg kan skrive mere?


Svar #1
04. marts 2011 af Okayyyy

Please, HELP !


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Svar #2
04. marts 2011 af Cnugs (Slettet)

School’s canteen
I don’t really buy foods in the school’s canteen, but I have tasted some food from there. (bemærk punktum) I have tasted a burger, pizza and muffin. The burger taste tastes okay, but the steak is smaller than the bread and there's not really so too much lettuce. I like their pizza really much seriously love their pizza, it taste tastes so good, and I could never be   get tired of them and the price is also good too.
There are both good and bad things about the canteen. The good things about the canteen are that they have the pizzas and they sell everything like sweets, fruits, cold and warm course and hot dishes. The negative things about the canteen are that their foods are a little bit expensive, the canteen is small, and there are few tables and chairs.
I will give the canteen 7 stars out of 10.


Svar #3
04. marts 2011 af Okayyyy

nu har jeg ikke brug for den mere, eller jo nu ved jeg mine fejl,
men tak alligevel, fordi du gad rette den :)


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Svar #4
07. marts 2011 af rakijovic

Så må man sgu lære at spørge i god tid, sweetheart.

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Svar #5
07. marts 2011 af Okayyyy

jaa, men nogen gange svarer folk med det samme :)


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