Engelsk rettelse på ca 8 linjer - anyone? (Haster)

Lig da jeg skimtede, faldt jeg over disse retelser:

Finally, I get the opportunity to answer you. I want to thank you a lot! The letters you have been writing to me was so fantastic to read  (evt. omformulering)! It unbelievable to see that you’re thinking about me at the whole time! kan man ikke sige. I want you to know that I love you too! But as you maybe  may know - my father ,doesn’t let me write to boys - and especially you.  As you may know, my father wont let me talk to boys, and especially not you. This is the reason why you haven’t heard anything from me yet. My father checks my letters, emails, phone, Facebook  and all my other things constantly! Her ville jeg nok sige "my father ckecks my letters, emails, phone and Facebook constantly.  Its almost impossible to write you back, but now I get the chance and I will exploit it.

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Hey. Jeg har et lille stykke tekst fra mit brev (ikk særlig meget), som jeg skal aflevere i morgen. Jeg vil gerne spørge om I kunne rette den for evt kommafejl eller lignende? Eller måske omfulere det lidt? :D Det vil betyde utrolig meget.. ;)