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13. november 2015 af MF30 (Slettet) - Niveau: A-niveau

Hej derude :-)

Er i gang med at lave en engelsk analyse, og vil dermed spørger om det jeg har skrevet indtil videre lyder korrekt.

The Wolfpack is a 2015 American documentary film. The movie focus on one specific theme and it is “media and identity”. Because it has something with the young people’s identity. For example, who you really are, and who you want to be. These brothers live like a prison where they have no privilege to do anything, and that is the reason that they are psychologically affected.


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Svar #1
13. november 2015 af Stygotius

The Wolfpack is a 2015 American documentary film. The movie (hvorfor nu "movie" lige pludselig og ikke blot "it"??)  focusses on one specific theme, (and it is) “media and identity”. (B)because it (has something) is to do with (the) young people’s identity(. For example,) like who you really are, and who you want to be. These brothers live (like a) in a sort of prison, where they (have no privilege) are not free  to do anything, and that is the reason that they are (psychologically) mentally affected.


Svar #2
13. november 2015 af MF30 (Slettet)

#1

The Wolfpack is a 2015 American documentary film. The movie (hvorfor nu "movie" lige pludselig og ikke blot "it"??)  focusses on one specific theme, (and it is) “media and identity”. (B)because it (has something) is to do with (the) young people’s identity(. For example,) like who you really are, and who you want to be. These brothers live (like a) in a sort of prison, where they (have no privilege) are not free  to do anything, and that is the reason that they are (psychologically) mentally affected.

Tusind tak :) Du har været en stor hjælp


Svar #3
13. november 2015 af MF30 (Slettet)

#1

The Wolfpack is a 2015 American documentary film. The movie (hvorfor nu "movie" lige pludselig og ikke blot "it"??)  focusses on one specific theme, (and it is) “media and identity”. (B)because it (has something) is to do with (the) young people’s identity(. For example,) like who you really are, and who you want to be. These brothers live (like a) in a sort of prison, where they (have no privilege) are not free  to do anything, and that is the reason that they are (psychologically) mentally affected.

Lige et sidste ting. Har nemlig rettet det du har skrevet og har lige tilføjet noget ekstra på. Lyder det også korrekt?

The Wolfpack is a 2015 American documentary film. It focusses on one specific theme, “media and identity”, because it is to do with young people’s identity. Like who you really are, and who you want to be. These brothers live in a sort of prison, where they are not free to do anything, and that is the reason that they are mentally affected. Moreover, they have no contact to the outside world, among the media. The theme are also loyalty and brotherhood owing to the fact that these brothers are very loyal and honest with each other. Their relationship is genuine and close.


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