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Både og og and er konjunktioner (bindeord). Bindeords opgave er at forbinde ord eller sætninger, og her er der jo ikke noget at forbinde.

I recently moved to London. Everything is perfect around here. But there’s one thing that isn’t perfect. There was this football/soccer match recently where Manchester United was playing (against) Manchester City. (And you’ll) You think “What’s wrong with that” 

It isn’t about the match, it’s more about the fanatical supporters or (H)hooligans. So as I watched from my window on the fifth floor how there were flares lightening up and (there were) explosions and fireworks. It’s about the Manchester City and United hooligans. They are (very crazy) mad and aggressive. They (have) ruined the match after Alexis Sanchez scored a goal (on) for? Manchester City. The hooligans were Manchester City supporters because the match ended 2-1 to Manchester United and I don’t think that Manchester United supporters (will) would be angry because of that. They don’t wear any T-shirts with Manchester City or United stamps on like in Denmark. They all wear this leather jacket and most of them are shaved bald and have Manchester City and United logo tattoos nearly all over their body and wear those big DR(.)-Martins boots(. K)kind of (M)military outfit. This (R)reminds me of the SS of World War 2 (with SS). They(ose) are Neo-Nazis! It’s really creepy (kind of creeping me out). They (walk around) hang out in big gangs all the time. There is a (P)pub right beside the hotel and they always go there(. M), mostly in the (when it’s evening). Once, there was thrown many maroons in the pub???. Police, ambulances and firemen arrived faster than they would in Denmark. There were people (bleeding out) covered with blood on the streets.  

 (So here the other day) The other day I wanted to take the train. (But then t)The loudspeaker in the metro, however, informed  the passengers that there were problems (was trouble in one of the trains that were the train that will go to) in one of the trains bound for Manchester. And of course, now it was the Manchester United supporters turn to beat City up after 1 month. Suddenly a lot of police with riot shields was in the metro with a bulletproof vest. (So every policeman) Policemen with riot shields barricaded the door and (those policemen with free hands were going) the others went in and (arresting) arrested members of United. The train (could look) looked like a(n abandoned) deserted train. Every window was smashed and the engine driver was beaten and tightened up. It looked really bad (it).  

It reminds me of Tony and Tommy from the book “Hooligans”. Kind of funny actually. It gave me the chills in the first place(. B)but then I forgot that police (is) are stronger than the hooligans. (But n)Now I can’t go to Manchester because of the damage(s) done. (But hey now I) Of course I now have more quality time to spend with my family and to go shopping and (eat) having some delicious food. 

(Best r)Regards