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Er det grammatisk korrekt?

02. marts kl. 13:08 af Minniei - Niveau: C-niveau

Hej

Så jeg forsøget at øve mig på at bruge forholdsord og har skrevet denne korte tekst. Ville høre om den er grammatisk korrekt:

The picture is a cartoon in which I can see two characters. The first character is standing at the doorway, and the other one is standing by the desk. There is also a poster on the wall, which says "Music Festival", and next to the poster, there is a clock.

On top of the computer desk is placed a computer. Underneath the computer desk, there is a wastepaper bin. The character, who is standing by the desk, is talking to the phone with one hand in one of his pockets. 


Svar #1
02. marts kl. 13:30 af Minniei

Og hvad med følgende tekststykke (her øver jeg mig på at bruge fremtid og fordatid):

The picture was taken during a bicycle race, which could be Tour de France.
One of the racers, the one in black sportswear, seems to be winning the race.

I am certain that this win will garantee him lots of success and fame. It might even become the start of a new everyday life for him.
However, during the past races, I am certain that he had been defeated many times before getting this far. Noone can become number one in a day.


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Svar #2
03. marts kl. 17:38 af Stygotius

Og hvad med følgende tekststykke (her øver jeg mig på at bruge fremtid og f(o)ørdatid):

The picture was taken during a bicycle race, which could be the Tour de France.
One of the racers, the one in black sportswear, seems to be winning the race.  Uforståeligt

I am certain that this win will garantee him lots of success and fame. It might even become the start of a new everyday life for him.
However, during the past races, I am certain that he had been defeated many times before getting this far. (Noone) No-one can be(come) number one in a day.

Er du sikker på at du ved hvad  førdatid er, og hvordan den tid bruges ??


Svar #3
03. marts kl. 19:10 af Minniei

Det troede jeg gjorde. Har du mulighed for at forklare det?

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Svar #4
03. marts kl. 22:14 af Stygotius

Pluskvamperfektum (førdatid) bruges om en fortidig begivenhed der ligger før en anden fortidig begivenhed.

Eks.

"When Peter came to see me and offered to take me to lunch, I had already had lunch".

Da Peter kom  (fortid) havde jeg allerede spist  (før  Peter kom) = førdatid.


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