kan jeg låne 5 min af din tid ? ;)

It was hard to understand. I had never thought, the day WOULD come. She had lived with me FOR15 years. We have shared everything. When I was sad, she had helped me, when I was happy she was there for me. Guys, now I want to tell you about my sister’s wedding. It is a day, I WILL never forget. It HAPPEND suddenly. In THE summer OF 2010 my sister and her boyfriend had decided to get married.
The wedding had TAKEN place in Barcelona golden beach in Spain. A very nice place. The sun was shining and people were excited. This place IS my favorite place in Didim. The beach is so wonderful and the sand is like gold. A clean and nice place. I had my pink dress on, and my hair was set up. I tried to look smart.
My sister’s wedding was BEGINING at 18 clocks. First, we ate. The menu CONSISTED of delicious food. A real spanish menu. I still remember the taste.
And AT about 20 O´CLOCK my sister and her husband came. I had never seen my lovely sister so beautiful. She had a long, white wedding dress on. We BEGAN with dance and had fun. The music and lights was an effect which DID the wedding more special. My aunt and I had bought red roses for the guests. The atmosphere was so amazing. Children played games, old women sat and talked, and young PEOPLE danced and have fun. My sister’s wedding was very special for me, because I HAD never before been in a wedding. It was a night, I never will forget. A night, which had a special meaning for me. A night I realized how important my sister is for me, how much I will miss her. But also a day and night I WILL always love and never forget.

Jeg siger tuuuuusind tak!!! ;-) hvis jeg retter de fejl, og ændrer lidt på ordforrådet, tror du så jeg kan få et stort 4 tal ? :)

Det kan jeg ikke sige, da jeg ikke hvad hvordan opgaven lyder. Men det lyder fint det du har skrevet.

At noget lyder fint er ikke ensbetydende med at at det også er rigtigt, kære #3. Hvis sprogregler og kommunikative normer skulle udformes på basis af hvad danskere synes "lyder fint" eller "ser fornuftigt ud", blev verdens sprog da hurtigt udhulede.