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Engelsk grammatik
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Jeg har skrevet lidt på min engelsk stil og ville bare hører om i kunne se om der var nogle fejl der.
Har taget nogle udklip fra den.
When the boys played their football matches and people saw that doesn’t matter if you are black or white just you feel good about each other that affected the town so much at even Gerry’s old girlfriend gave the black people a try.
They had to overcome their prejudges before they could be like a dynamic, winning team. And Herman Boone demands that. It was rough at the start, but the boys learnt how to live with each other and even became friends at the end. They overcame their prejudges because they realize it doesn’t matter if you are black or white it’s what inside that’s what counts.
Tak på forhånd!
Svar #1
26. maj 2011 af frederikkedp (Slettet)
prøv og undlad that og brug f.eks. it (snakker om den første sætning med that) og se om du kan erstatte det med et andet ord eller undlade det 9 ud af 10 gange skal that undlades
Svar #2
26. maj 2011 af Krusez (Slettet)
så det bliver f. eks
"When the boys played their football matches and people saw it doesn’t matter if " ikke?
andre fejl? og tak :)
Svar #5
27. maj 2011 af munequita (Slettet)
Jeg forstår ikke helt denne sætning. jeg synes ikkel helt 'delene' passer sammen.
that doesn’t matter if you are black or white just you feel good about each other that affected the town so much at even Gerry’s old girlfriend gave the black people a tryl
they overcame(datid) their prejudices because they realized(datid) it doesn’t matter if
It’s what inside that’s what counts. -->It is what is inside that counts.
er det en skriftlig opgave ville jeg undlade sammentrækninger. Er det noget du skal fortælle så det ok.
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