grammatikfejl??? (engelsk)

" (...) det works jeg har på min pc er lidt specialt [sic] så jeg vælger at give jer en lidt sjusket tekst (...)"

En dårlig håndværker giver altid værktøjet skylden... ;)

Nuvel. Din tekstbid er vel ikke så meget et referat som det er recension (anmeldelse), og selvfølgelig med folkeskoleobligatorisk prominent "min nuttede mening" på fremtrædende plads... Jeg har lavet lidt om på stykket (ordvits ej tiltænkt), og de bidder du skal se nærmere på er markeret med fed.

In the movie [AmE movie, BrE film] “Shakespeare in love” we follow the famous Shakespeare in his young days, when he is writing Romeo & Juliet. However, he is lacking inspiration —more precisely, 'words' — and do not know what to write. He did, however, still hold audtions so as to find cast members for his play.

One day, Shakespeare gets eye contact with an uknown woman, who has by pure accident walked in on one of his auditions. She is dressed as a boy, and he becomes fascinated by her alting [huh? acting?]. Although at first he doesn't know her true gender, upon discovery he agrees to keep her secret, and Viola -- as she is called -- is cast as Romeo.

Viola ultimately becomes Shakespeare’s great love, and with her as his "muse", the words he was missing for his play now come to him.

The film is a romantic tragedy/comedy. I think the film was good, little exiting and little sad*), but..! Also litte boring. It was a typic romantik movie and i think there was missing something, I dont no what..!!! But it maked me bored sometimes under the film.

May be because I have seen romantic movies better than ”Shakespeare in love” cause actually i really love romantik movies, and ”Shakespeare in love” is a great movie, but not the best of all these love movies I have seen, so i will give the film: 3 «««

(Det sidste var sgu noget af en selvgentagende smøre. Hvad si'r du til "As romantic films go, this one wasn't too bad. A bit dull and long-winded at times, but as romantic films go, I've seen worse. My rating a blablabla"?)

tusind tak! er tanknemlig for hjælpen, og forresten det er faktisk rigtigt, at mit word er dårligt, fordi det er meget gammelt, også frygter jeg at de fleste her ikke ville kunne åbne dokumentet, da det også bliver til noget crapshit hos min lærer:-)

Jeg kan se at jeg i farten glemte at tilføje noget; i afsnittet "the film is a romantic lalala" har jeg sat en asterisk ved little sad. Dette fordi du mangler ubestemt artikel 'a' foran samtlige "little".

A little boring = en smule kedelig --- men uden artikel betyder det at filmen ikke var så kedelig som du havde håbet på (filmen var lidet kedelig)

Fx;

He knew little of Mongolian toothbrushes  (han kendte meget lidt til mongolske tandbørster)

He knew a little of Mongolian toothbrushes (han kendte dog trods alt noget til mongolske gebisbørster)

(Hehe...crapshit...den har jeg faktisk ikke hørt eller brugt i lang tid.) ;)