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Har du ikke haft denne oppe før? Syntes jeg har set den blive rettet en gang :/

One of the major cultural similarities between the Danish culture and the one my parents practice is the great interest and demand for education. One of the things that I value a lot is that it is free to take an education in Denmark and that there are is easier access to the educational system, and with by that I mean that everyone can take get an education, you don’t need to have a high position in society, you do not have to be rich or poor, believe in a “serten certain” religion, or have a “serten certain” Nnationality in order to get an education.
I would like to have get an education because it is something I really strive for. I love getting gaining new knowledge and I want an education because I want to be in that part of society that helps Denmark economically, but also help the people and especially young people who do not fare do particularly well at the school and in the society.
This small country Denmark has a lot to offer, I'm really glad that I had got have the opportunity to do/acces/experinece these incredibly special things in Denmark, such as education, wide range of experiential opportunities, different amusement parks, and fashion shops and much more. Denmark has been and will always will be my wonderland in my fairytale stories, which I will always love.

Du mangler utrolig mange komaer, men jeg er selv en brækket arm til det, så har kun sat 2.

Jeg har bare taget de ting der ligesom skreg mig i øjenen. Der er nolge ting hvos sætningen måske ville lyde mere naturlig på en anden måde, men det  skal jo stadig være dit sprog ;)

Jeg har skrevet do/acess/experience, fordi du bare skal have en eller form for verbum der... så er det jo lidt hvad du syntes der skal lægges vægt på..

"School" er ikke med "the" vis du snakker om uddannelsen "school", frem for det fysiske sted "school". "The school burned down" kan du godt sige, for det er den fysiske skole. Men det hedder "He never really cared for school" hvis det er uddannelsen/begrebet. Det samme med society, ud over der nærmest ikke er nogen tilfælde hvor det hedder "the", da det ikke er fysisk.

Jeg ved ikke om du skrev "serten" i gåseøjne fordi du vidste det var stavet forkert? Men ellers må du jo bare fjerne dem igen ;)

Nogen af gangene hvor jeg har fjernet "get" eller skrevet "get", kan man vist godt bruge begge dele, men jeg har skrevet den af dem som falder mig mest naturlig (jeg er lidt dansk-amerikaner og får 12/12 i Engelsk A i DK, og fik A+ i USA, så jeg håber mine fornemmelser holder)

1.  can take get an education(, y). You don’t need

2.  that part of society that helps Denmark (economically) financially,

3.  such as education, a wide range of

4.  experimential opportunities

5.  (different) various amusement parks

6.  (and)  fashion shops and............

7.  will be my wonderland in my fairytale stories, (which I will always love) and I shall always love it

8.  "kommaer"

9.  One of the major cultural similarities between (the)  Danish culture

10. "to practice" (amer.)   -  "to practise" (engl.)

11. One of the things that I value a lot is that (it is free to take an) education is free in Denmark

12. (believe in) embrace / adopt  a “serten certain” religion

13. that part of society that helps Denmark (economically) financially,  but also help (the) people

14. (This) A small country like Denmark has a lot to offer