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25. august 2011 af modetøj1 (Slettet) - Niveau: 8. klasse

Jeg ville høre om der var nogen som ville rette min tekst? jeg er rigtig dårlig til engelsk, så har taget mig meget lang tid at skrive denne lille tekst, så ville blive glad hvis nogen gad at rette den :-)


Summary of I hate my skinny body!

A girl write about how she hate her skinny body. When she look at other girls, they have more curves than her. She always have the pressure that she won’t get any boys or she’s too skinny and wear a size 34A in bra and size 2 in jeans. Even her little 11-year old sister has more body than her.

Holly answer , that she have to stop worry about what guys think about her body. She means that most guys like girls of all different shapes and sizes – but one thing that guys generally don’t like is girl who are constantly worry about their body. She tell her, that her body is just fine, and that she got to work on building up her condifence – but not the sake of her life or social life, but because it make her feel better all around. She also have to quit with comparing her body with over girls. All girls want to change something about the way the look, and Holly is sure, that there are plenty of girls who love to swap body with her. But off curse it won’t happen overnight, but if she do what holly say, it will come with time. And Holly’s says that she will be surprised at how many people more, there will be around her, not because she look different, but because her self-esteem is pretty attractive.
 


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Svar #1
25. august 2011 af Sanina (Slettet)

Hey Du ;-)

Dit resumé er rigtig fint og detaljeret.

Du skal dog huske at verber i 3. person ental (He, She, It) tilføjer et "S".

F.eks du skriver "She hate". Det rigtige er "She hateS"

Ergo, de verber der står i 3. person ental skal have et "s" på bagen, ellers er det fint ;-)

- Det ligger til et 7-tal, hvis det er en opgave der skal karakter på ;-)


Svar #2
25. august 2011 af modetøj1 (Slettet)

 Sådan her? :-))

A girl writes how she hates her skinny body. When she looks at other girls, they have more curves than her. She always have the pressure that she won’t get any boys or she’s too skinny and wear a size 34D in bra, and size 2 in jeans. Even her little 11-year old sis has more body than her.

Holly answer, that she have to stop worry about what guys think about her body. She means that most guys like girls of all different shapes and sizes – but one thing that guys generally don’t like is girls who are constantly worry about their body. She tell her, that her body is just fine, and that she got to work on building up her condifence. But not for the sake of her life or social life, but because it make her feel better all around. She also have to quit with comparing her body with other girls. All girls wants to change something about the way they look, but Holly is sure, that there are plenty of girls who love swap body with her. But off curse it won’t happen overnight, but if she do what Holly say, it will come with time. Holly say, that she will be surprised at how many people more, there will be around her, not because she looks different, but because her self-esteem is pretty attractive.

 


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Svar #3
26. august 2011 af Sanina (Slettet)

Ja noget i den stil i hvert fald ;-)

Du har dog stadig et par grammatiske fejl..

To have på engelsk bliver bøjet således

I have

You have

He, She, It has

We have

you have

They have.

Der hvor du har skrevet "She have" Skal der stå "She has". Men ellers er det da ikke så slemt? Især ikke hvis du kun går i ottende ;-)


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Svar #4
26. august 2011 af rakijovic

Sanina, dušice,

Yderst sjældent kan man tro på hvad folk skriver i deres profiler. Fx er spørgerens tekst tilsyneladende på ottendeklassesniveau, mens spørgeren selv er seksten og går i tiende klasse. Endnu sjovere er det med din profil, i flg. hvilken du er 15 år, men kun er nået til anden klasse. ;) Godt nok er jeg tilhænger af  "studirati coolirati", meeeeeeen... :D

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