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Nogen der har noget til til at kigge en kort stil igennem ?

21. oktober 2011 af mirzad (Slettet) - Niveau: 8. klasse

Jeg har skrevet en slags stil, som jeg er lidt i tvivl om.

Det en opgave som jeg skal svar på.

Ved ikke om jeg har lavet den rigtigt, så hvis du har tid eller ville.

Hvis jeg har nogen fejl må du meget gerne sætte en streg under, men det er ikke så meget det der er vigtigt, mere om jeg har lavet opgave rigtigt, havde lidt svært ved at forstå den.

 

 

-Tak på forhånd :)

 

 


Svar #1
21. oktober 2011 af mirzad (Slettet)

stilen er her:

 

The prize of fame?                                                                                                                                                                         

In reality shows do all of thing to be on TV.  In sport, some athletes use doping to perform better and other have tried to hurt or injure their competitors. Why some people are willing to go to extremes in exchange for fame and where would you personally draw the line?

I think it is bad that people hurt themselves so much.
It may be that they are not happy with themselves and then choose eg. to get a nose up ration or eat pills to be slim or also something else.
The famous would really like to look good and be famous, but I do not think it is good to do these things to be famous.
instead, one could think of the good things about yourself and live life as it is.
Those who do so are perhaps "teased" or so they (jaloux) on the other familiar people and they do not think about their mistakes but only his own.
All people around the world have both something good and bad. some are fat some are poor and there is not one on earth who has everything. Even the richest happiest person missing something.
It is also someone in the world who would not even have a single wrinkle on the forehead or face, although they are 50 years of age. It destroys elsewhere in the body if you think carefully about.


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Svar #2
21. oktober 2011 af Stygotius (Slettet)

Den tekst har du jo fået rettet grundigt en gang allerede.


Svar #3
21. oktober 2011 af mirzad (Slettet)

Ja, men har jeg svaret rigtigt på spørgsmålen

In reality shows do all of thing to be on TV.  In sport, some athletes use doping to perform better and other have tried to hurt or injure their competitors. Why some people are willing to go to extremes in exchange for fame and where would you personally draw the line?

Det er det jeg er i tvivl om. kan godt selv rette stavefejl, men er i tvivl om svaret passer til opgaven :O


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