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ENGELSK abstract (haster)
Hej... Det er den sidste del jeg mangler til mit 2. års SRP. Men af flere grunde så er jeg en skovl til engelsk og jeg er virkelig bange for at mit abstract trækker ned i karakter da det også er med i bedømmelsen.
Jeg vil derfor sætte en stor pris på hvis nogen gad rette det jeg har skrevet, ja jeg har prøvet at skrive noget istedet for at opgive. Og vær nu sød at lad vær med at hakke ned på det jeg har skrevet men istedet for komme med forbedringer til mit abstract og hvad jeg skal fokuser mere på i mit skriftlige engelsk.
ABSTRACT:
This Study investigates is intended to find out how politicians use staging through the media and which influence it has on society. The first section is an introduction which presents the theory and the materials we use in the analysis and discussion. The theory consists of the three forms of appeal, the media as a fourth state power, spin etc. Our materials are part videos and articles found at the internet. The materials consist of two partyvideos one from Mitt Romney and one from Enhedslisten, beside this our materials contain also some articles we found at the internet. The next part is an analysis which is about how staging is used in real life and what influence it has on people. We set the theory up to the reality. After analysis comes a section with discussion. The disadvantages and advantages with staging the politicians and spin are discussed. Staging is good for politicians when they get votes out of putting themselves into a good light and they also avoid showing their negative aspects when they stage themselves through the media. Staging is rather a bad thing for the citizens do not get the bad sides of politicians to view. Citizens are staging among politicians a bad influence. Spin is the worst kind of staging. In our conclusion we can conclude that staging has a bad influence in both Americans and Danish citizens.
Svar #2
16. februar 2012 af Walleh (Slettet)
I sagde haster, så jeg har skyndt mig (dvs. jeg har holdt mig så tæt på det oprindelige, men rettet med hård hånd, frem for at omskrive)
The investigations in this study are intended to examine how politicians use staging through the media, and what influence this has on society. The first section is an introduction which presents the theory, and the materials used for the analysis and discussion. The theory consists of the three forms of appeal, the media as a fourth power of state, spin etc. The materials used include online videos and articles. The materials involve two party videos, respectively from Mitt Romney and Enhedslisten. Other materials entail articles from the web. The next section is an analysis about how staging is used in real life, and what influences it has on people. The theoretical material is compared to the reality. The last division of the study discusses spin and the disadvantages and advantages of staging politicians. It is established, that staging themselves through the media, is good for politicians when they gain votes from putting themselves in good light and avoid showing of their negative aspects. Staging is a rather bad thing for the citizens, who do not get to see the bad side of a politician. Thus, staging among politicians has a bad influence on citizens. Spin is the worst kind of staging. In the conclusion, it can be determined that staging has a negative influence in both Americans and Danish citizens.
Hvis I har mere tid, kigger jeg den gerne endnu grovere igennem, da sproget stadig bærer præg af at det oprindeligt er skrevet af nogen, der ikke er helt komfortable i det engelske sprog :)
Der udover, hvor meget har I gennemgået hvordan man skriver abstract? Jeg har skrevet mit på en meget anderledes måde, (men får først min SRP tilbage om et par uger, så skal ikke gøre mig klog på hvad der er rigtigt!).
Svar #3
16. februar 2012 af aatgsue (Slettet)
Tusind tak.
Den skal afleveres klokken 22:00 men dog er der andre ting som også skal på plads jo :)
But, thank you :)
Svar #4
16. februar 2012 af Walleh (Slettet)
Ok, jamen så vil jeg sige at du kan have god samvittighed med dette abstract :) Her er det igen, med fed skrift i de sætninger hvor jeg lige har rettet et par få ord til, og et komma (fordi den slags bare skærer mig i øjnene :b )
The investigations in this study are intended to examine how politicians use staging through the media, and what influence this has on society. The first section is an introduction which presents the theory, and the materials used for the analysis and discussion. The theory consists of the three forms of appeal, the media as a fourth power of state, spin etc. The materials used include online videos and articles. This involves two party videos, respectively from Mitt Romney and Enhedslisten. Other materials entail articles from the web. The next section is an analysis about how staging is used in real life, and what influences it has on people. The theoretical material is compared to the reality. The last division of the study discusses spin and the disadvantages and advantages of staging politicians. It is established, that staging themselves through the media, is good for politicians, as they gain votes from putting themselves in good light and avoid showing of their negative aspects. Staging is a rather bad thing for the citizens though, who do not get to see the bad side of the politician. Thus, staging among politicians has a bad influence on citizens and spin is the worst kind of staging. In conclusion, it can be determined that staging has a negative influence in both Americans and Danish citizens.
God vind med de sidste ting på dit SRP :)
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