Fejlsætninger i engelsk

Hej studieportalen

Jeg har følgende fejl i min engelsk stil, og har fået til opgave, at rette og forklare fejlene. Er der nogen der kan hjælpe mig her, jeg synes det er lidt svært :'(?

På forhånd tak! (:



“In the text the American dream is interpreted as an old dream that might is gone antiquated.”
 

“,and additionally the earth can’t take the pressure of the continual rising in the material and  conomical standard.”



“, but because of the financial problems many families are suffering under in America, it’s almost impossible to achieve.”



“He talks about how he came to USA and how he have gained success the last 20
years,”



” This informal text with everyday experiences has got a few grammatical errors.”

“and a something other European countries could learn from”
 

“The world has witnessed a globalization and the American dream can now also act in some degree in Europe”



“By working hard, focused and independent, I will believe that once the crisis is over it will again be easier to achieve the American dream.”



Mvh
Christian

he has gained fordi det er 3. person :-) 

“In the text the American dream is interpreted as an old dream that might has gone antiquated.”

“, but because of the financial problems many families are suffering from in America, it’s almost impossible to achieve.”

This informal text with everyday experiences has got a few grammatical errors     undlad ubestemt kendeord a

and a something other European countries could learn from        undlad ubestemt kendeord a

and the American dream can now also act    in some degree in Europe”       .        nowadays er bedre end now.  "To a certain degree" er bedre end "in some degree" men ikke nødvendigvis en fejl.      Erstat  verbet act med take place.   Flyt verbet take place om bagved degree for  at få en bedre ordstilling 

 I will believe that once the crisis is over      undlad will.   Skriv when i stedet for that once 

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