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Hej med dig.

Jeg har kigget på din tekst og lavet lidt rettelser – som jeg har skrevet nedenfor.

Discrimination might be one of the most terrible things in the world. For most people it's impossible to comprehend that some people can have so much hatred towards other people. For example it's outrages that Ku Klux Klan in Mississippi could discriminate against black people for so many years without being stopped. That a difference in skin color from white to black can result in so many things is impossible to understand. I think that discrimination can also just be small things. Like when the doorman allows the pretty girls in first and discriminates those who are ugly, although he doesn't kill anyone as the Ku Klux Klan did. It's just like with crime; there exists both shoplifting and killings and both we call a crime although they are very different.
I think that as long as there are people on Earth, there will also be discrimination.

- Jeg har ændret lidt på ordstillingen I første sætning
- Byttet ordet “strange” ud med “outrageous” i Ku Klux Klan sætningen og omformuleret denne en smule.
- Ændret ”blacks” til ”black people” (det andet er for meget slang)
- Samlet with out til ét ord.
- Rettet en smule formulering i sætningen om ”white to black” og byttet lidt om på din ordstilling i sætningen herefter.
- De sidste to sætninger havde lidt problemer med ordstilling og formulering – se min rettelse ovenfor og spørg, hvis du er i tvivl om det jeg har skrevet.

Jeg håber at det hjælper.

SMS

PS: Jeg har ikke gjort så meget ved din tegnsætning – så det kan være en god idé, hvis du grundigt løber hele afsnittet igennem igen.

Discrimination might be one of the most terrible things in the world.

For most people it´s impossible to comprehend that some people can have so much hatred towards other people.

(du skriver "people" 3 gange, det er ikke forkert, det ser bare lidt sjovt ud, prøv at skrive: for most people, it is impossible to comprehend that some people can hate others so mutch)

For example it's outrages that Ku Klux Klan in Mississippi could discriminate (væk med "against") black people for so many years without being stopped.

That a difference in skin color (væk med "from white to black") can result in so many things, is impossible to understand.

I think that discrimination (is also little things), like when the doorman allows the pretty girls in first and discriminates those who are ugly, although he doesn't kill anyone as the Ku Klux Klan did.

It's just like ( væk med "with") crime; there exists both shoplifting and killing (væk med "s") and both (are considered a crime) although they are very different.
 

I think that as long as there are people on Earth, there will also be discrimination.

Er der en særlig grund til at ordet "colour" er skrevet  "color"  ??

Color er engelsk, og colour er amrikansk. Sådan har jeg lært det.

Næh du, -det er lige omvendt.

Anna Louise Y,  (#2)

Du har desværre ikke ret.

At diskriminere hedder "discriminate against" på engelsk.   SMS100 har her helt ret.

Grundbetydningen af ordet "discriminate" er at "skelne", og man kan jo skelne både til gunst og til ugust for nogen.

Derfor er det sådant set meget logisk at man på engelsk siger "discriminate against."

Okay, lige det vidste jeg ikke, tak for oplysningen,

Men resten af rettelserne var der ikke noget galt med

Nææh, det er ikke noget galt med det, men jeg ville nok foretrække:

Discrimination (might be) is perhaps  one of the most terrible (things in the world) ways to treat other people.

For most (people that) it´s (impossible to comprehend) hard to see how some people can (have) feel so much hatred towards others (people).

(du skriver "people" 3 gange, det er ikke forkert, det ser bare lidt sjovt ud, prøv at skrive: for most people, it is impossible to comprehend that some people can hate others so mutch)   -god kommentar !!

(For example it's outrages that) To take an example: it's revolting to know that  the Ku Klux Klan in Mississippi could discriminate (væk med ") against( ") black people for so many years without being stopped.

(That a difference in skin colour (væk med "from white to black") can result in so many things, is impossible to understand.) The fact that the colour of people's skin could lead to so many acts of violence is beyond comprehension. 

(I think that discrimination (is also little things), like) Discrimination shows its ugly head in many situations, both great and small:  when the doorman (allows the) lets attractive girls in first and (discriminates those who are ugly, although he doesn't kill anyone as the Ku Klux Klan did) keeps the not so prety ones out it's discrimination, although not to the extent as in the case of the Ku Klux Klan.

It's just like ( væk med "with") crime; (there exists) both shoplifting and killing are considered criminal (væk med "s") and both (are considered a crime) although they are very different), but certainly on very different levels..

I think that as long as there are people on Earth, there will also be discrimination.