Engelsk
retning af grammatik
18. august 2005 af
Delija (Slettet)
Hey er der nogle fejl i den her indledning?
Today’s children are being exposed to an amazing number of 20.000 ads a year. These children aged 12 and under are of course suggestible and are easy to exploit for the thousand of companies producing these ads. The children’s influence on the parental purchases goes beyond the everyday necessities and often affects the choice of travel destinations and cars which the companies have great benefit of/from.
The children have a great influence on their parents and that gives the companies the advantage in producing more ads every day. The ones being exploited are the children but they can’t see how they change in behavior especially towards the parents. This of course is a problem not only for the economy of the concerned families but for the children growth
Today’s children are being exposed to an amazing number of 20.000 ads a year. These children aged 12 and under are of course suggestible and are easy to exploit for the thousand of companies producing these ads. The children’s influence on the parental purchases goes beyond the everyday necessities and often affects the choice of travel destinations and cars which the companies have great benefit of/from.
The children have a great influence on their parents and that gives the companies the advantage in producing more ads every day. The ones being exploited are the children but they can’t see how they change in behavior especially towards the parents. This of course is a problem not only for the economy of the concerned families but for the children growth
Svar #1
18. august 2005 af Mybber (Slettet)
amazing number of 20.000 ads a year...
Jeg ville nok sige amazing number of ads, 20,000 a year...
Vh Mybber
Jeg ville nok sige amazing number of ads, 20,000 a year...
Vh Mybber
Svar #2
18. august 2005 af TheBunny (Slettet)
Ville sige: "...amazing number of ads, amounting to 20.000 a year."
...benefit of..
..this is of course a problem..
og så mangler du bare lige "'s" i det sidste "children"
:)
...benefit of..
..this is of course a problem..
og så mangler du bare lige "'s" i det sidste "children"
:)
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