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pit er det = bit altså en lille del ?

More and More det sidste More skal ikke stå med stort M.

we can't recognized, kan du ikke sige, men we can't recognize kan du godt skrive.

because they scared that they will... kan du ikke skrive, men because they are scared kan du skrive.

Prøv at lade være med at skrive de samme ord-prøv synonymer. 

Det var lidt hjælp, håber det går godt, held og lykke :)

P.S det var ikke alle fejlene :)

Du skal til eksamen i morgen, og du har skrevet en artikel. (Det har du så strengt taget ikke, men det er en anden diskussion.)

Bøfferne er markeret med fed. Flere fejl i samme frase og som hører sammen er understreget. Fejlformuleringer er ligeledes understreget.

Why there are a little pit of the people, who like to live in a small area, while the other part of the people refused ?!. Many people Did not like to live in the huge city, because they fear from the danger. But we cant convinced that there is a danger only in the big cities. When we live in a small cities , that’s means we don’t have many options. Many of the people feel that they have to live in a big cities , because that (håbløs danisme: "fordi at" – og det hedder i.ø. ikke "fordi at" på dansk; kun "fordi"!) they will have many options and many new things daily. There is many advantages when we live in a small area, but there [her mangler der noget!] also some disadvantages. How we could compare between these idea, and details?.

Work and schools
More and More students moved to the big area because they would have a better life. But More and More parents prefer to let their children , or teenager in the small cities to protect them from many things. We can’t recognized if the parents help their children in this way , or they prevented the many options from them. There are many students who they were being bullied in the school ,in the small area . Because in the small area there is not so many developments. In the small (hér mangler vist et ord...) the people live in the same way. There is no for example homosexual , or like that. There are some parts of the society they cant live in the small area , because they scared that they will being bollid or they faced some problems.

Friends and the relationship

There are many of the teenager who do not have many friends , because they live in a small area. They don’t meet many teenager like them in the small area. Therefore there are many of the young people who feel that founding a boy or girl friend is the worst. Although in the huge area become a very quantity of the betrayal. So it is like if you live in a small area , or a big area its almost the same!.

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Det er en skam at du ikke begyndte at øve dig lidt før, men så igen; hvis man spørger om omfattende hjælp ikke engang tolv timer før eksamen, er ens sprogfærdigheder nok ikke dét man prioriterer højest...