Engelsk bøjning?

Det ser rigtig godt ud.

Nej du har to fejl.

1.) Tror du mener "by comparing",

desuden er der en fejl i sætning 10 fra neden. Det hedder "are many" og ikke "Is many".

2.) 2. sidste linje. Tror vidst du mener "considering" og ikke "considered", da "considered" er i datid.

I am planning for a very rewarding  holiday next  summer.  reward      OK

but there are some choices to be made.What type of holiday should I

choose?   choice      OK

Should I go to  summer school to better some of my academic qualifications?  qualify           OK

On the other hand , I am not in particularly good shape, so perhaps I could go to a sports school to

improve my physical endurance and develop my  endure         OK

compettion spirit . compettion  "competition"

First  I'll have to write an (apply) application   and fill in some forms apply

It's not that easy beacuse there (is) are so many difficult questions  to answer.  questionable

For example, 'What are your plans for the future?' personally i think   person       OK

I feel  I'm pretty ambitious but perhaps they think my plans are silly.  ambition         OK

By compared the different options , comparison  ????????

I'm sure I'll make the right decision.  decide        OK

However , I am not  absolutely  convinced  that more school whould be the best idea right now .  absolute      OK

Maybe i should seek  employment   just to gain work experience;  employ        OK

That w(h)ould develop my personality  and improve my communication skills .  development      OK

(Considered)  Considering I am going to be 18 next year, I don't have much time to waste.One thing is for sure;  consideration 

The future will not be boring .  boredom      OK

By compared the different options , comparison  ????????

By comparing the different options

Ja, selvfølgelig "comparing".   Jeg har sovet i timen.

okay tak for hjælpen :)