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Just like several others silent movie stars the comedian Buster Keaton had to face the fact that the publicity had forgotten him, after many years of fame. But after 30 years with smaller roles and much booze, he became very popular again. In the fifties people start to use bits of his old movies on TV, and it quickly turned fast that his inevitable face still able to get the audience to splitting with laughter, just as in his heyday in the '20s.
One critic writes: >>He was the only major comedian who never directly revealed emotions in his films. But his large, expressionless face elicited the most diverse effects<<. This ability to under act his role had Keaton developed in his early years at variety, where one of his most popular numbers were being hit over the head with a broom. After standing motionless and expressionless for several seconds, he finally just said a word>> Av!<<.
Keatons poker face, or stone face, as it has been called, was his trademark. Just only once he had lured to smile in a movie, and it was not a good idea.
This meant immediate ruin. I lose all my money, I lost all my money, and it amounted, after what was written in the newspapers, to roughly five million dollars. I should never have smiled. Very early in my career I discovered that no sooner has one comedian joked on stage before the crowd becomes deadly serious, and upturned. when comedian is serious, the audience immediately ready to scream with laughter.<<
Klog of Skade Smilte Buster Keaton therefore not as a audience. which includes many celebrities from the literature of the film world,  they giv him five minuttes of thunderous applause after the screening of his film << General >> in Venedig in 1965. He cried.