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Hej alle! 

kan jeg hurtigt få en til at kigge den her passage igennem og rette? :) 

The article consists of formal language, with technical and grammatical correctness. The subject she deals with is already at a technical high level. She therefore compensates by using lots of humor and irony, which pulls it down at a slightly lower level. In this context, “The relief theory" is connected. One of the articles primary focuses is diseases, which can be regarded as a taboo. The relief theory is used to create a certain distance to the subject. Every time we approach, we’re "pushed away" and something funny is being said, instead. The otherwise serious topic becomes less seriously because of the humor.