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HJælp til CV på Engelsk
Hej!
Jeg er i øjeblikket i gang med, at skrive et CV på engelsk.
Jeg har lidt svært ved at formulere skole delen. Og hvis der er nogen der vil rette den igennem for eventuelle fejl ville det være helt perfekt.
My name is Julie. I was born on the 16th of February 1994 in Denmark. In 2009 I graduated from high school and I am currently on my last year of college. My main subjects are business economy, social studies and English. I will be graduating this summer.
Between 2008 and 2013 I have worked as Christmas assistance at a movie/music retail store. I basically cleaned the store, re-stocked movies and CDs, wrapped Christmas presents, price tagged items and helped costumers.
In my spare time I practice taekwondo, which is a martial art. I’ve been practicing it for the past 9 years. In 2010 I achieved the black belt also known as 1. Dan. Since 2008 I’ve been coaching a kids team once a week. I also work as an official taekwondo judge. I’ve been judging official fights since 2012, which is over a year.
I will consider myself very happy and open. I love to challenge myself and I’m that type of person who always smiles. I’m a hard worker, and I value costumer service very high.
I currently spend a lot of my time on homework, family, sport and friends.
Tak - Julie
Svar #1
06. april 2013 af butji (Slettet)
High school = gymnasiet, College = universitetet. Jeg går ud fra du ikke er på dit sidste år i universitetet når du er 18-19 år.
"I basically cleaned the store ....."
Ville jeg nok hellere skrive
"My area of work were cleaning the store ...."
Og så vil arbejdsgivere meget gerne også høre hvad du har fået ud af arbejdet, ikke bare hvad du har lavet.
"I've been judgin official fights since 2012, which is over a year"
Der ville jeg nok ikke minde dem om at det er over et år.
Hvad mener du med "I will consider myself very happy and open"? mener du open som i udadgående? så er det "outgoing" og hvis du mener open som frisindet så er det "open minded", sidst er det "I consider myself..." ikke "I will"
"I'm that type of person..." -> "I'm the kind of person..."
"family, sport and friends." -> "family, sports and friends."
Held og lykke
Svar #2
06. april 2013 af IluTom (Slettet)
Jeg har også rettet en del i det siden jeg uploadede det her.
Hvordan vil du så forklare det med skolen?
Ps. Det er et cv for arbejde i Canada.
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