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Korrekt formulering?
Dette handler om fashion og reklame. Det er svar på nogle spørgesmål. Men er de formuleret korrekt eller kan man omformulere dem, så det lyder bedre/ "mere rigtigt". Synes mine formuleringer er på et meget lavt niveau.
Håber i kan hjælpe.
1.Of course it’s forms your self-expression. Especially for some girls, they thing they are more attractive if they wear makeup and the trendy- clothes.
2.A lot of girls see fashion show and it give them a ideas that their should look like these models, because they are the perfect one and the beautiful one.
3.Maybe it will help the girls, which think they are not good enough just because they don’t look like the models.
4. I don’t think it’s the costumer’s reasonability. Although it’s the people with problems which respond inappropriately to ads. Example If a girl “should” be like the girl in the tv, or she will kill herself.
5. It’s the truth. A lot of girs think they are not thin and start to fitness, because they will have the same body like the models.
6. The media have a very big influence on the young people out there. I don’t think they make the image of the women a little bit unrealistic but it’s essayer to make influence on the women than the masculinity.
7. Yes, they are. They think fashion is the most important thing in their life.
8. Fashion say a lot about you personality, If you buy and only wear the clothes which is fashionable, it will not be your style.
Tusind tak på forhånd.
Svar #1
15. september 2013 af Helenass (Slettet)
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1.Of course it forms your self-impression. Especially for some girls, they think they are more attractive if they wear makeup and trendy clothes.
2.A lot of girls watch fashion shows and they give them ideas of how they should look like, with their bodies and how they dress, because they are the rolemodels to these young girls.
3.Maybe it will help the girls, who think they are not good enough just because they don’t look like the models.
4. I don’t think it’s the costumer’s responsibility. Although it’s the people with problems who respond to the ads. For example If a girl “should” be like the model in the tv, or she will kill herself.
5. It’s the truth. A lot of girls think they are not thin enough, eventhough they already are too thin. So they start to fitness, because they want to have the same body as the models, in the commercials.
6. The media have a very big influence on the young people out here. I don’t think they make the image of the women unrealistic but it’s easyer to influence the women than the men, because women are much more sensitive, and take almost everything personal
7. Yes, they are. They think fashion is the most important thing in their life.
8. Fashion says a lot about you personality, If you only wear the clothes that are fashionable, it will not be your style, but just a copy of another person, but you can also choose to mix new and old, and make a brand new outfit.
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