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Så hvis der er nogen der har lidt ekstra tid i ærmet, ville jeg sætte stor pris på lidt hjælp!

På forhånd tak, 
Maria

Her er brevet:
 

Dear sheriff.

It was late at night. The sun had almost completely disappeared behind the silhouette of the tall houses. I was going for an evening walk with my dog and the neighborhood was silent. Suddenly I heard some noises that sounded like they were coming from about two blocks away. The noises became louder and I now heard people hollering. I became curious and wanted to know what was going on. As I approached the place where the fuss was coming from, I heard someone yell: “Turn them damn niggers over to us! We know how to treat them! We’re going to hang every damn one of them!” I discovered that the noises came from outside the jail, and I could see dozens of people gathering around the jail. Some of the people from the crowd broke into the jail through several doors and bars. A couple of minutes later they came out with prisoners one by one, all blacks. One of them was hanged from the bar of one of the jailhouse windows. Another was lynched by a rope thrown over the branch of a tree. It was awful and I really wanted it to stop, but the crowd was simply too big for me to do anything. I suddenly noticed some uniformed police and was relieved. Now the madness would probably stop. But it didn’t. The police was helping the mobster members, by clearing a path from the jail to the courthouse square, where the black prisoners where hanged. I can’t even begin to describe how it made me feel, to watch policemen being a part of such an act.

I hope my testimony is helpful for you.
Best regards,
Maria