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22. januar 2014 af diddyfooty (Slettet) - Niveau: 9. klasse

Rasmus Vistoft Hornbek

Free writing – letter

Hello there.

I think it is a great idea that you would like to do a sport, and I will do everything I can to help you on your way! The first thing that comes to my mind when I read this, is that you would like to make new friends, so in my opinion you should choose a team sport. When you do a team sport together with other people, you are very social in hours of training and hopefully hours of fun! There is also more than one way you can be involved in sports, you can also be a trainer if you have some experience with a sport. For example I am a coaching assistant in football, I really enjoy training these small happy lads! I train them all for free, but money is not necessary for me, I enjoy the time with these boys. I remember when I was in that age, and we had a teenage boy coach, I thought he was the coolest guy ever! In my life sport is a very big part. I live on a boarding school where I practice football 5 times a week. In the evening I am body-building, so that I can keep my physique into the game. Back in the days I chose football because my older brother played, and I guess I thought it was a funny sport to do. Some years ago I played hockey, it was a very cool sport, and loved it very much, but it was also very troublesome, because it was far from where I live, and a very expensive sport to do.

I think that sport is one of the most important things in our lives. It keeps us healthy, happy, strong and social with other people. That something everyone needs in their lives. I cant really think of so many disadvantages to being involved in sports.. maybe that it requires a amount of time every week, and then it often cost some money a month or year.

Doing sports is one of the greatest ways of making new friends. So just jump right into it, I am sure u can find a team sport that you will enjoy.

This is my opinion in sports, I hope it was usefully!

Regards Rasmus  

Hej håber der er nogen som kan rette dette her :-)


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Svar #1
26. januar 2014 af Christianos (Slettet)

Først: Det er din lærers opgave at rette dine lektier.

Dernæst: Brug ikke en sms-forkortelse som "u" som substitut for "you".

Dernæst: "I hope it was useful", ikke usefully.

Hvis du går i 9. klasse er teksten fuldt ud tilfredsstillende, og du bør ikke bekymre dig om små kongruensfejl og manglende kommatering. Se at få det afleveret ;)


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