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18. februar 2006 af
Hanniballen (Slettet)
Jeg har et brev her, jeg gerne vil have rettet for de evt. fejl.
Det ville være en stor hjælp. :D
// I don’t think that what you did, where the right way to handle the dispute between you and your parents. There must be a reason for your parents, why they didn’t give you their permission to get a Saturday job.
Maybe it has something to do with how you’re doing in school. I don’t know how you’re grades are, but if you don’t have the best grades, then that could be the reason for them saying no.
But I have to say this. To get a job now when you have your exams to worry about, isn’t the greatest idée. Maybe when your exam is over and you got some good grades, then you could ask them again, and see what they say.
And to colour your hair in despite, and taking make-up on, so your face can’t be seen, will only provoke them more. And see that what they did, were the right thing to do, because you aren’t mature enough, to even accept the decision they made. It will only make the situation more badly than it already is.
I know that when you get to a certain age, you want to earn your own money. And I know that pocket money isn’t the same. But money is money, no matter where they come from. So if it’s the money that you want, then ask your parents for a raise, now that you can’t get a job.
Ask them for some more chores, and after a while they will see that maybe you are mature enough to get a job in the weekends, and that it won’t interfere with you homework.
But if that doesn’t work, then help them out when they need a nanny, or some one to go shopping, and so on. Do some volunteer work at home. Show them that they can trust you. And if that doesn’t work, then suck up for them as much as you can.
And the thing with the party? You can’t tell me, that if you were a parent, you would let your kid go out to a party, without knowing where and with whom he or she was with. It’s the parent’s responsibility to make sure that nothing happens with you, and if do so, they have to know where you are so they can come and help you out in the worse cases. And if something happens to them, they have to know where to find you. It’s just something you have to do, because if you don’t tell you parents where you are normally, then one day, they find out, that you haven’t been home for a week, and that you’re nowhere to be found.
In the bottom of the letter you ask me what went wrong, and my answer is a lot. First of all, the communication. You have to learn, that with talking is listing. You should listen more to your parents, and trust them that what their doing is only to do, the best for you.
Second of all, you shouldn’t do things just to spite them. It will only ruin the relationship that you have with them, and it shows that you don’t have respect for them.
Show them that they don’t have to be that nervous for you, but that they can trust you.
Tak på forhånd ^^
Det ville være en stor hjælp. :D
// I don’t think that what you did, where the right way to handle the dispute between you and your parents. There must be a reason for your parents, why they didn’t give you their permission to get a Saturday job.
Maybe it has something to do with how you’re doing in school. I don’t know how you’re grades are, but if you don’t have the best grades, then that could be the reason for them saying no.
But I have to say this. To get a job now when you have your exams to worry about, isn’t the greatest idée. Maybe when your exam is over and you got some good grades, then you could ask them again, and see what they say.
And to colour your hair in despite, and taking make-up on, so your face can’t be seen, will only provoke them more. And see that what they did, were the right thing to do, because you aren’t mature enough, to even accept the decision they made. It will only make the situation more badly than it already is.
I know that when you get to a certain age, you want to earn your own money. And I know that pocket money isn’t the same. But money is money, no matter where they come from. So if it’s the money that you want, then ask your parents for a raise, now that you can’t get a job.
Ask them for some more chores, and after a while they will see that maybe you are mature enough to get a job in the weekends, and that it won’t interfere with you homework.
But if that doesn’t work, then help them out when they need a nanny, or some one to go shopping, and so on. Do some volunteer work at home. Show them that they can trust you. And if that doesn’t work, then suck up for them as much as you can.
And the thing with the party? You can’t tell me, that if you were a parent, you would let your kid go out to a party, without knowing where and with whom he or she was with. It’s the parent’s responsibility to make sure that nothing happens with you, and if do so, they have to know where you are so they can come and help you out in the worse cases. And if something happens to them, they have to know where to find you. It’s just something you have to do, because if you don’t tell you parents where you are normally, then one day, they find out, that you haven’t been home for a week, and that you’re nowhere to be found.
In the bottom of the letter you ask me what went wrong, and my answer is a lot. First of all, the communication. You have to learn, that with talking is listing. You should listen more to your parents, and trust them that what their doing is only to do, the best for you.
Second of all, you shouldn’t do things just to spite them. It will only ruin the relationship that you have with them, and it shows that you don’t have respect for them.
Show them that they don’t have to be that nervous for you, but that they can trust you.
Tak på forhånd ^^
Svar #1
18. februar 2006 af Ralphi (Slettet)
I don’t think that your way to handle the dispute between you and your parents, was the right way to do it. There must be a reasonable explanation for why your parents didn’t permit you to get a Saturday job.
Maybe it has something to do with how you’re doing in school. I don’t know how your grades are but if you don’t have the best grades, then it could probably be a reason for their rejection.
But I have to tell you something. When you are busy with your school and you have your exams to worry about, a job isn’t the greatest idea. Perhaps (bare for at variere mellem perhaps og maybe) when your exams are completed and you have got excellent marks, you could ask them again and hopefully, they will agree with you.
And to dye your hair and use make-up (eller dying your hair and using make-up), so your face can’t be seen, is only a way to provoke them more. Because of that they will realize that their decision was right, as you aren’t mature enough to even accept their decision. It will only make the situation worse than it already is.
Tager det andet om lidt..
Maybe it has something to do with how you’re doing in school. I don’t know how your grades are but if you don’t have the best grades, then it could probably be a reason for their rejection.
But I have to tell you something. When you are busy with your school and you have your exams to worry about, a job isn’t the greatest idea. Perhaps (bare for at variere mellem perhaps og maybe) when your exams are completed and you have got excellent marks, you could ask them again and hopefully, they will agree with you.
And to dye your hair and use make-up (eller dying your hair and using make-up), so your face can’t be seen, is only a way to provoke them more. Because of that they will realize that their decision was right, as you aren’t mature enough to even accept their decision. It will only make the situation worse than it already is.
Tager det andet om lidt..
Svar #2
18. februar 2006 af Ralphi (Slettet)
Her får du mit bud... håber du ka bruge det :)
I know that when you get to a certain age, you want to earn your own money. When you get older your pocket money isn’t the same but after all; money is money, no matter where they come from. So if it’s the money you want, then ask your parents for a raise, now that you can’t get a job.
You could maybe ask them for some more chores, and after a while they will see that you are mature enough to get a job in the weekends, and that it won’t affect your homework.
If it doesn’t work you could offer your help when they need it at home for example you could help them with babysitting or help them with the grocery shopping. You have make sure that they trust you and you’re faith to them. And if that doesn’t work, then suck up for them as much as you can? Hvad mener du med den sidste sætning???
Regarding the parties, you said that if you were a parent, you would let your children go out to a party, without knowing where and with whom they were together with. I absolutely disagree with you because it is the parent’s responsibility to make sure that nothing happens to you, and if it happens they have to know exactly where you are so they be there at any time and help you out in the worse cases. Even if something happens to them they have to know where to find you to let you know. It’s something you just have to do because you live with them and have to show responsibility. If you don’t tell you parents where you are normally, then one day, they find out, that you haven’t been home for a week, and that you’re nowhere to be found, which will make them worry and devastated.
In the bottom of the letter you ask me what went wrong, and I have many answers to this question. First of all, the communication. You have to learn, that with talking is listing? (forstår ikke denne sætning) You should listen more to your parents and trust them in what they are doing concerning you. After all, parents want the best for their children, even if it doesn’t look like that. They won’t let you work in the weekends because they are worried for your future, as they want you to study and become a great job, so you can earn enough money. They want to know where you go out in the evenings because they care about you and love you very much. If something happens to you, they just need to know where you are. (Fik lige lyst til at skrive lidt til hehe... du ka bare slette hvis du ikk sys det er godt..)
Second of all, you shouldn’t do things just to provoke them. It will only ruin your relationship to them, and it shows that you don’t have that much respect for them.
The best thing to do is to show them that they can trust you and that they don’t have to be that nervous for you.
I know that when you get to a certain age, you want to earn your own money. When you get older your pocket money isn’t the same but after all; money is money, no matter where they come from. So if it’s the money you want, then ask your parents for a raise, now that you can’t get a job.
You could maybe ask them for some more chores, and after a while they will see that you are mature enough to get a job in the weekends, and that it won’t affect your homework.
If it doesn’t work you could offer your help when they need it at home for example you could help them with babysitting or help them with the grocery shopping. You have make sure that they trust you and you’re faith to them. And if that doesn’t work, then suck up for them as much as you can? Hvad mener du med den sidste sætning???
Regarding the parties, you said that if you were a parent, you would let your children go out to a party, without knowing where and with whom they were together with. I absolutely disagree with you because it is the parent’s responsibility to make sure that nothing happens to you, and if it happens they have to know exactly where you are so they be there at any time and help you out in the worse cases. Even if something happens to them they have to know where to find you to let you know. It’s something you just have to do because you live with them and have to show responsibility. If you don’t tell you parents where you are normally, then one day, they find out, that you haven’t been home for a week, and that you’re nowhere to be found, which will make them worry and devastated.
In the bottom of the letter you ask me what went wrong, and I have many answers to this question. First of all, the communication. You have to learn, that with talking is listing? (forstår ikke denne sætning) You should listen more to your parents and trust them in what they are doing concerning you. After all, parents want the best for their children, even if it doesn’t look like that. They won’t let you work in the weekends because they are worried for your future, as they want you to study and become a great job, so you can earn enough money. They want to know where you go out in the evenings because they care about you and love you very much. If something happens to you, they just need to know where you are. (Fik lige lyst til at skrive lidt til hehe... du ka bare slette hvis du ikk sys det er godt..)
Second of all, you shouldn’t do things just to provoke them. It will only ruin your relationship to them, and it shows that you don’t have that much respect for them.
The best thing to do is to show them that they can trust you and that they don’t have to be that nervous for you.
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